Question

请老师帮我看看这个句子有没有语法错误，谢谢！

He is just like a prodigal that drifts and lost shimself ,who is the Baudelaire and Walter Benjamin ‘s character, ,bringing a camera and working through the crowds
中文是：他就像是一个Baudelaire and Walter Benjamin笔下的浪人，随波逐流，迷失自己，带着一个照相机穿梭在人群中！ 谢谢老师！

Answer 1

1、lost不是动词原形，不能再加s。
2、Baudelaire前的定冠词the表示：他是Baudelaire and Walter Benjamin笔下的唯一人物，这是错误的。结尾处的the crowds也是同样问题。
3、working 应为 walking。
其他语法没有错误，但意思表达的不够清楚，建议改成：
He is just like a prodigal in a Baudelaire and Walter Benjamin's novel, drifting through life, losing himself, and walking through crowds with a camera.

Answer 2

that 改成 who drift ? and是 并列连词, 所以 drift lost这两个词的形式该一样. 哎 翻译太夸张了你.
He lost his way and goes back and forth in the crowds with a camera, following others blindly, just like a prodigal in the novel written by Baudelaire and Walter Benjamin.
标准翻译. 英语的句子和中文的句子不同. 要先说重点 再说其次. 翻译英语要知道翻译的原则. 你还得好好加油哦

Answer 3

He is just like the prodigal described by Baudelaire and Walter Benjamin, who is drifting and getting lost in the crowds with his camera.

Answer 4

翻译的挺好的