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Swimming is an individual or team sport and activity. Competitive swimming is one of the most popular Olympic sports, with events in freestyle, backstroke, breaststroke, and butterfly.
SUBTOPICS
1.Competitive swimming provides same benefits as other sports
a.It is good exercise and builds muscular strength
b.It promotes cooperation among team members, especially in relays
2.Competitive swimming provides some additional benefits
a.Swimming is an important skill that can be used forever
b.There is a reduced risk of injury
Conclusion
Based on all the benefits of competitive swimminig listed above, it is an ideal sport for kids.
Swimming is an individual or team sport and activity. Competitive swimming is one of the most popular Olympic sports, with events in freestyle, backstroke, breaststroke, and butterfly.
SUBTOPICS
1.Competitive swimming provides same benefits as other sports
a.It is good exercise and builds muscular strength
b.It promotes cooperation among team members, especially in relays
2.Competitive swimming provides some additional benefits
a.Swimming is an important skill that can be used forever
b.There is a reduced risk of injury
Conclusion
Based on all the benefits of competitive swimminig listed above, it is an ideal sport for kids.
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