Question

请高手看看 以下这篇英语文章有什么语法错误

My hometown is Shanghai,which is a very beautiful city. She is not only the city where I was born,but also the only place. I've never been able to leave. There are more than 20 million people living in here. She is famous for economic and trade, and it is also a international and busy metropolis. My town has a river which named huangpu river. Many visitors come to Shanghai in public holiday of every year. They always go to the Bund which to visit the huangpu river. Anything else, The Oriental pearl tower is a Shanghai landmark. It is located in Pudong.By the way, Disneylan is open coming soon. So come to Shanghai and you'll enjoy it. Well, that's my hometown.I love this city.She has almost all my memories.

Answer 1

第二行living in here应改为living here，因为here是副词；
第三行economic是形容词，应改为其名词economy；
第四行a river which named huangpu river要么改为a river named huangpu river，要么改为a river which is named huangpu river，另外要写成Huangpu River；

第四行in public holiday应改为in public holidays，因为holiday是可数名词，且前面无冠词；

第五行which to visit the huangpu river应删掉which，另外要写成Huangpu River；
The Oriental pearl tower首字母都要大写；

Anything else, 放在句首没有这种用法，要表达“另外”的意思可以用in addition、moreover、what's more等；
倒数第三行Disneylan少写了字母d，打字打错了吧。

大概就只有这些了。