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题主字挺好看的:D
(2)is应为 was,因为此处前无情态动词或完成式等等,应同其他句保持时态一致。
3)enjoy改为stayed,题中词意没原因
4)send改为rent,租借,rend-rent-rent
5)went boating,划船
6)gave改为bought,题意“买”,没原因(你看题后也是啊
其余无误。只是7)中的like改为enjoy更准确。
作文全文:(根据题意,你只要将句子串起来并增添链接句就好)
(原创的!)
I went to Thailand on my winter holiday and I enjoyed myself there for five days.Now it's my pleasure to tell you my experiments during this five days' holiday.
It was winter there,but it was still warm.There are many places of interest in Thailand.I stayed there for five days.I rent a motor bike and traveled around the island.After that I climbed hills,went boating and also took many photos.Finally I bought my families some presents and also one for you.
I enjoy this trip very much.Wish everything with you is all right!
全程手打原创,望按一下采纳键好吗:D
真心用心
(2)is应为 was,因为此处前无情态动词或完成式等等,应同其他句保持时态一致。
3)enjoy改为stayed,题中词意没原因
4)send改为rent,租借,rend-rent-rent
5)went boating,划船
6)gave改为bought,题意“买”,没原因(你看题后也是啊
其余无误。只是7)中的like改为enjoy更准确。
作文全文:(根据题意,你只要将句子串起来并增添链接句就好)
(原创的!)
I went to Thailand on my winter holiday and I enjoyed myself there for five days.Now it's my pleasure to tell you my experiments during this five days' holiday.
It was winter there,but it was still warm.There are many places of interest in Thailand.I stayed there for five days.I rent a motor bike and traveled around the island.After that I climbed hills,went boating and also took many photos.Finally I bought my families some presents and also one for you.
I enjoy this trip very much.Wish everything with you is all right!
全程手打原创,望按一下采纳键好吗:D
真心用心
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