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难道我的房间不漂亮吗英语

Answer 1

问：难道我的房间不漂亮吗英语

答："Do you mean my room isn't pretty?"

问：看看我的作文有没有错误的

答：好的请发给我

问：过去了

答：My name is Millie. We moved to a new house last week. My room is pink and it makes me feel warm because pink is my favourite colour. There is a big and comfortable bed, and there is a writing desk. I often lie on my bed when I want to relax. On the desk, there is a pink computer. I can use it for learning and also for playing games to relax after finishing my homework. I keep my room clean and tidy. My room is the best place for me to study and relax, and I like it very much. Do you think my room is not pretty?改正：在第二句话中，“We moved to a new house last week.”后面应该加上一个句号；在第三句话中，“makes me feel warm”应该用“makes me feel”更准确；第四句话中，“And”应该改为“On”；在第五句话中，“I can learn on it”后面可以加上“it”以避免歧义；在第七句话中，“I keep my room clean and tidy.”的后面应该用句号结束。