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英语作文纠错

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问：英语作文纠错

答：亲，您的问题还有其他要补充的吗？

问：您好帮我改正划红线的句子语法错误 只需要把它改成正确的 不需要换一种说法

问：最好一次性改完给我谢谢您哦

问：请问改好了吗

答：Hello, I'm Li Hua. Last Friday, our school held a successful badminton match to make us happy. It was a very good match, and all of our school's students and teachers enjoyed it.

答：During the match, teachers and students played badminton and were so excited that the match was amazing. In the end, the students won the match, and everyone in the school laughed. After the match finished, some students wanted to hold it again, and some teachers thought it was a very nice match. Everyone liked it.

问：好的 可以麻烦您评价一下这篇作文吗 联系上题目 从内容语法评价一下这位学生写的

答：首先，这篇作文与题目相关，描述了学校举办的羽毛球比赛。其次，语法方面还有一些错误需要改正。例如，“anazed”应该是“amazed”，“when”应该是“won”，“hefdit”应该是“hold it”。

答：另外，这篇作文使用了简单的句子和词汇，表达清晰易懂。但是，在描述比赛时，可以加入更多细节和感受，让文章更加生动有趣。

答：总体而言，这位学生写得不错，只需要注意语法错误，并在表达上增加一些细节就可以了。