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摘要 In order to make our city cleaner and more beautiful, the young volunteers of our school went to the People's Park this morning and offered our help.

At eight, the head of the park met us at the gate. After being divided into groups, we set out to work at once. Some tidied up the parking area and had motorbikes paiked in the right place. Some took care of the flowers and bushes, and persuaded

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英语作文，给点写作建议

您好，一个好的英语作文。答案一定是一个超豪华的开头、结尾。写好作文的关键在于审好题。所谓“磨刀不误砍柴工此悉胡”森拦，切不可认为打草稿是浪费时间。作文要有结构，在打草稿时应想好结构，不能陆帆想到什么写什么，运用一些好的短语句型锦上添花。

请给点写作思路，谢谢

可以，写一次你的志愿者经历，先写你为什么当志愿者，然后写当志愿者的过程，最后写一下你的收获和感想。

谢谢！

In order to make our city cleaner and more beautiful, the young volunteers of our school went to the People's Park this morning and offered our help.At eight, the head of the park met us at the gate. After being divided into groups, we set out to work at once. Some tidied up the parking area and had motorbikes paiked in the right place. Some took care of the flowers and bushes, and persuaded

people to keep off the grass. Around the tiger den, one group kept order to prevent accidents from happening. At the aquarium, another group worked as guides and advised visitors not to smoke. When some of us were doing cleaning, an old man praised us and said, "Well done, young fellows!We were all tired but happy. What a morning we had today!

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