请帮我看一下我写的英语作文有没有语法错误，O(∩_∩)O谢谢!
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This story reminds me one of my 【experiences】. I once had a fierce quarrel with my parents because I didn't want them to read my personal dairy secretly. Later, my father had a heart to heart talk with me【,】[表承接，不是并列关系，不用and，用逗号]he told me 【that】 he could understand what I though. At the same time, he shared his opinion 【with me】, 【and I was deeply impressed by his words】.
In my opinion, there is a generation gap 【between】 children and 【their】 parents, and it will be hard for us to get along with 【our】 parents. However, 【all, everything our parents do, they do only because they love us】. So the key to dealing with the relationship between parents and children is to understand each other. As the saying goes, "The secret of success is to have a happy family."
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In my opinion, there is a generation gap 【between】 children and 【their】 parents, and it will be hard for us to get along with 【our】 parents. However, 【all, everything our parents do, they do only because they love us】. So the key to dealing with the relationship between parents and children is to understand each other. As the saying goes, "The secret of success is to have a happy family."
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