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摘要王霞是一名来自毕节大山的初中生，是一个优秀又刻苦的学生。她家在大山里，没有公路，因此上学只能步行。山路难走，学校也离得远，离她家里有三四公里，她常常要花费半小时到学校。但是她从不埋怨。Wangxia is a junior high school student from Bijie Dashan. She is an excellent and hardworking student.Her home is in the mountains, there is no road, so she can only walk to school. The mountain road was difficult to walk, and the school was far away. It was threeorfour kilometers from her home. She often had to spend half an hour to get to school.But she never complains.

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英语作文60词

王霞是一名来自毕节大山的初中生，是一个优秀又刻苦的学生。她家在大山里，没有公路，因此上学只能步行。山路难走，学校也离得远，离她家里有三四公里，她常常要花费半小时到学校。但是她从不埋怨。Wangxia is a junior high school student from Bijie Dashan. She is an excellent and hardworking student.Her home is in the mountains, there is no road, so she can only walk to school. The mountain road was difficult to walk, and the school was far away. It was threeorfour kilometers from her home. She often had to spend half an hour to get to school.But she never complains.

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请问有些词语可以用初一下册的词语代替吗？

有些词语我都没有见过，可以帮我用初一的词语代替吗？

那你看看改哪些呢？上面有翻译，你看一下告诉我我来改好吗？

第一段的话我认为是没有问题的

有一个excellent是优秀的意思，这个可以当做课外高级词记下来，写作常常会用到哦！

优秀可以换一个吗？

那换一个简单的smart

clever

这两个你看看自己换一个

后面有一个就是threeorfour是分开的，three or four

然后还有一个就是埋怨，这个没学过就换掉这一句话吧

But she still happy everyday

但是她每天依然很快乐

这样没有问题了吧？

应该可以了

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