英语短文改错!急死了!
Ifirmlybelievethateveryoneintheworldloveshismother.SoamI.Mymotherisanordinaryteacher....
I firmly believe that everyone in the world loves his mother. So am I. My mother is an ordinary teacher. She always works hardly, just as other mothers do every day. In fact, she isn't good health. She had been suffering form arthritis for many years. In spite of this, he never stops working or gives up hope. I still remember the day that my mother accepted a card of congratulations for Teachers.day from her director. The card was read "Thank you for your hard works;Happy Teachers.Day to you!"
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2011-03-25
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am改为do
hardly改为hard good healthy 前加in
had改为has he改为she
gives改为giving that改为when
hardly改为hard good healthy 前加in
had改为has he改为she
gives改为giving that改为when
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……love of his mother. …… is an ordinary teachers. She always works, , she is not very healthy. ……, he never stop working or give up hope. ……you for your hard works; happy teachers. 不行超长了
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s++++he
Teacher's Day teachers‘ day
删第四句每天和改顺序
中心不明确,最后那两句不知表达什么,
I still remember ···· that my mother 改remember how happy my morther 收到他学生的卡好些
Teacher's Day teachers‘ day
删第四句每天和改顺序
中心不明确,最后那两句不知表达什么,
I still remember ···· that my mother 改remember how happy my morther 收到他学生的卡好些
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am--do
hardly-hard
good--in good
had--has
he-she
gives--giving
that--when
accepted
received
was去掉
works-work
hardly-hard
good--in good
had--has
he-she
gives--giving
that--when
accepted
received
was去掉
works-work
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