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DearDavid,I‘velearnedfromtheinternetthatyouareeagerlytomakefriendswithachinesetohelpy... Dear David,
I‘ve learned from the internet that you are eagerly to make friends with a chinese to help you study Chinese and it’s culture 。I think it will be pleasure to be my friend。I‘m LI Hua ,a senior 3 student in Xiangyang. I am good at both English orchinese ,so I am sure I can be of a great help to you。WE can often write letters,sendE-mail 。phone each other or even chatting online ,
in this way you will know more about chinese and my English will get improve as well what do you like it?改错,说明每个错的原因详细点
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Dear David,
I‘ve learned from the internet that you are eagerly(-eager;be eager to do sth,这里用形容词) to make friends with a(a删除,泛指中国人) chinese to help you study Chinese and it’s culture .I think it will be pleasure to be my(-your;成为你的朋友) friend。I‘m LI Hua ,a senior 3 student in Xiangyang. I am good at both English or(-and;both.. and..; either...or..固定搭配;)chinese ,so I am sure I can be of(of删除) a great help to you.We can often write letters,send E-mail ,phone each other or even chatting (-chat;和前面的时态统一,都用一般时;)online .
in this way you will know more about chinese and my English will get improve (-improved;get sth done;get后在分词)as well what do you like it?
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1.eagerly改成eager,这是形容某人的心情的,只能用形容词,不能用副词,故应把eagerly改成其形容词形式
2.friends改成friend,后面已经说明是要和一个中国人交朋友了,怎么可以用复数形式?
3.pleasure改成pleasant,pleasant意思是令人喜欢的,it will be +形容词+to do sth,而pleasure是名词,意为令人愉快的事。
4.both English or Chinese中的or改成and,both A and B是固定句式
5.E-mail改成E-mails,前文提及可常联系,所以发邮件应该不止一封邮件
6.get improv改成gets improved,英语能力是被提高而不可能是自己提高,故应用被动形式,另外谓语也必须改为第三人称所对应的形式。
7.最后一句修改一下。改为in this way you will know more about chinese and my English will gets improved as well.Do you like it?
另外,注意一下句子的首字母需大写的问题。
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