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She was doing her homework when I was arriving.和Iwas reading when she was cooking .这两句话改错 哪里错了

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问：She was doing her homework when I was arriving.和I was reading when she was cooking .这两句话改错 哪里错了

答：亲亲很高兴为您解答，关于She was doing her homework when I was arriving.和I was reading when she was cooking .这两句话改错 哪里错了分析如下：这两句话中，应该把“was arriving”改为“arrived”，“was cooking”改为“was cooked”，因为这些动作不能用进行时表示，应该用一般时态描述。两句话改正后的形式如下：She was doing her homework when I arrived.I was reading when she cooked.注意“arrive”和“cook”是瞬间动作，不适用于进行时态。

问：arrive我能理解 可是cook为啥是短暂动词 烧饭不是有个过程的嘛

答：亲亲很高兴为您解答，关于把“was cooking”改为“cooked”分析如下：把“was cooking”改为“cooked”，因为“cook”这个动词既可以表示短暂的动作，也可以表示持续的状态，可以根据上下文语境判断，但是在这个句子中，因为“cook”表示的是烹饪这个动作的完成，所以用一般过去时态表示更为准确。

答：亲亲，I was reading when she was cooking." 这句话中的错误是使用了不正确的时态。正确的表达应该是："I was reading when she cooked." 因为"cooked"表示过去的动作。