Question

请帮我看看这段英语是否有语法错误，谢谢！

I am a common human being who desire to experience uncom-mon life.I am an optimistic person and I always remember the w- ords “Tommrow is another day” which said by Scarlett,the heroine of Gone with the Wind. In my spare time, I like reading essay and playing pingpang, badminton.
Everyone has a star twinkleing within their hearts,me too. I am eager to fly even without wings and it is so pleasant for me to strive for it. If I am given a chance for advanced studies in this famous University,I will do my best.
That is all.Thanks for all of you!

Answer 1

基本上没什么语法问题，不过觉得有点怪怪的,容我稍稍改些
I am a common person who desires to live uncommon life.I am optimistic and I always keep the words “Tommrow is another day” which said by Scarlett,the heroine of Gone with the Wind in mind. In my spare time, I like reading.Playing pingpong and badminton is my favorite pastime.
Everyone has a star twinkling in his heart,me too.I am eager to fly even without wings and it is so pleasant for me to strive for it. If fortunately I am given this chance for advanced education under your direction,I deem I will do my best.
That is all.Thanks for your time!