Question

请英语高手帮忙翻译一下，简历里用～谢谢～

进入大学前，我从家乡采购了两千余元的珍珠饰品准备到大学销售；入学后，通过发布广告、让同学帮忙推荐、上门服务等方式，成功地将饰品全部售出。为此我感到很自豪，不仅因为减轻了生活拮据的家庭的负担，还亲身体验进货－销售全过程，并从中学到了很多销售技巧。
在一次兼职中（工作内容是：调查事业单位对山东电力集团公司的电力服务质量的满意度），有一家单位拒绝了我的三个同事的访问请求，我怀着可能会失败的心态，找到了那家单位的负责人，诚恳地、坚定地请求他接受我的访问，一开始他拒绝了，我坚持请求并强调这次调查用途是提高以后的服务质量让事业单位更满意，最终他同意了我的请求，我内心既感意外也相当高兴，且还得到了督导的赞赏。

呵呵，应届本科生求职呀…敬请帮修改修改＜可删赘句＞再翻译，谢谢了！

Answer 1

My proudest thing is saling jewelry in the campus when I was a freshman,which not only made my family proud of me, but also alleviated the burden on the family.
I purchased jewelry in low price from my home town; in my university,by the ways of advertising,door-to-door service and my classments promoting to more college students,I successfully sold out the jewelry and won my first pot of gold.
Through this thing,I thought that the way of sales and the relationships are very important in a successful sales career.
I worked as a part-time investigator for Shandong Electric Power Group Corporation. One time, the head of a public institution had rejected the requests of my three colleagues before me; though maybe I would fail like them, I sincerely and firmly asked him to accept my visit, he rejected at the very beginning, I insisted on the request and emphasizeed the purpose of this survey was to improve the quality of service, eventually he agreed my request. At that time, my heart filled with surprise and happiness. Naturally I won the manager's appreciation.
Through this thing, I realized that good faith and perseverance were of great importance.

Answer 2

Into the University ago, I purchased a home from the two Qian Yuyuan pearl jewelry ready for sale to the University; admission to the public through the publication of advertisements for students to help recommend, such as door-to-door service, successfully sold jewelry. To this end I am very proud, not only because of the difficulties of life to alleviate the burden on families, but also to experience the purchase - the entire sales process and learn a lot of sales skills.
In a part-time in (the work are: the investigation of the Shandong Electric Power Group Corporation and institutions of power satisfaction with the quality of service), a unit rejected my request to visit three of my colleagues, I may fail with the state of mind, to find That the person in charge of the unit, sincerely and firmly asked him to accept my visit, he rejected the very beginning, I insisted on the request and stressed the purpose of this survey is to improve the quality of service after more satisfied with the institutions so that eventually he agreed My request, my heart is very happy surprise, and also has been steering the appreciation.

Answer 3

Before entering university, I have purchased more than 2,000 yuan of pearl ornaments product from the hometown prepare to arrive at a university marketing;After studying in university,I sell out by issuing advertisement , making the recommendation being in the same school giving a hand , come knocking at sb.'s door to offer one's service waiting for way , successful general ornaments product all.
I feel being proud very much for this purpose, not only because of the burden having lightened the family short of money living, the firsthand experience purchase of merchandise- has sold the entire proceeding, and has arrived at many marketing skills from it.
Once in a part-time job(The content working is: Inquire into the public institution degree of satisfaction to Shandong electric power conglomerate electric power service quality),a unit rejected the request to visit of three of my colleagues,so I'm keeping possibility psychology that can fail in mind,found that unit person in charge , the pay a visit to requesting that he accepts me sincerely staunchly,but he has refused one go ahead,I have insisted that the service quality requesting that are to improve a hereafter and emphasizing that makes public institution more satisfied , he has agreed with my requesting ultimately , but I have got appreciating supervising with all the pleasure in life, and both feeling accident and the heart.