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可以帮我修改英语作文吗？

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问：可以帮我修改英语作文吗？

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答：亲亲～～您好，请将您的作文发过来哦～～我一直在线～～

问：好哒

问：我想要你帮我改优美一点

问：就是我写句子有的比较单调，然后你帮我改高级一点

答：哦呜，好的，是参加什么比赛吗？看着像参加比赛活动的文章

问：不是比赛

问：作业

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答：The slogan of the Winter Olympic Games is "towards the future together". Although there are just five simple words, it expresses mankind's vision for the future,which calls on all humanity to pace hand in hand and look forward to the future together.In my proposal,why I regard the Community of Shared Future for humanity are the future together?(其实想改个主语从句，但是改动太大了)

答：As we settle on the same earth and share a common home that we should all cherish it genuinely to make our mutual home become more and more beautiful. From a small point of view, we live in the society, and everyone has their own small groups,

答：(前面逗号去了）which can be connected together . In small groups, we basically donating ourselves to the same direction and just for a better tomorrow. We should have a sensation of teamwork. In small groups, we should know how to seek common ground while retaining differences, learning from each other's competitiveness and working together in unity and make common progress.

答：For a simple illustration, when we sat in the same classroom of high school with other students, we could come to school on time and study hard every day that in order to get a permission ofInstitute and continue to work hard in university."Towards the future together" symbolizes the reciprocal struggle of all humanity. Let's advance forward together!

答：电子版的有些难理，我再检查一下。其实许多一模一样的单词用意思相近的词代替就行了，你的句子确实比较散，试着连接了一下，短时间内是这样，我比较适合手写版，但那样太慢了。

答：希望我的回答可以帮助到你

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