Question

请帮我修改下英语

Hello, everyone my name is huiyi I’am twenty-tow years old. I come from Xian shanxi province in china. I’v lived in shan xi since I was born
And I’am living in xian now. I’am currently a driver at the shanxi construction company. There are four people in my family my panrents grandma and me.
I have a one elder brother and tow elder sister.
And my panrents living in xian too., My father is a mechine engineer. he works in the shanxi construction too. But he often go to abroad/he used to go abroad. And my mother is a housewife.she is a great woman. I live with my mother since I was bron.
I am very grateful to her for my upbringing.
I interested in sports, listening to music speaking english and spinding time with my friend .
I am a faithful man. And I am easy going. I haven’t girlfriend. Ok
I am happy to come here to stady with you. Besause I am english very poor . would you give me some good advice. Iam really glad could be with you today, I hople ereyone has a wonderful time
Thank you

Answer 1

Hello, everyone my name is huiyi I’m twenty-two years old. I come from Xian shanxi province in china. I’ve been living in shan xi since I was born
I’m living in xian now. I’m currently a driver at the shanxi construction company. There are four people in my family: my parents, my grandma and me.
I have one elder brother and two elder sisters.
My parents are living in xian too., My father is a mechanical engineer. he works in the shanxi construction too. But he often go abroad/he used to go abroad. And my mother is a housewife.she is a great woman. I live with my mother since I was born.
I am very grateful to her for bringing me up.
I interested in sports, listening to music, speaking english and spending time with my friends .
I am a faithful man. And I am easy going. I don't have a girlfriend. OkI am happy to come here to study with you. Because my English is very poor . would you give me some good advice. I am really glad to be with you today, I hope everyone has a wonderful time
Thank you

问题不大，程度已经不错了。
有些语法和句子结构上的问题，尽量改了。例如：My English is very poor (不是I am English very poor)
注意:单数和复数的法，句子开头尽量不要写那么多“And”,缩写方式错误：“I am”缩写后是“I'm”，不是“I'am”
单词拼写有很多错误，例如：two(不是tow),mechanical engineer(不是mechine engineer)，spending(不是spinding)，hope，everyone,parents,because等等

Answer 2

作为一个司机，这些英语已经够了，该表达的也表达出来了，有些单词的拼写和语法错误也问题不大
比如parents, mechanical等等

Answer 3

嗨，大家好。我叫惠宜，我22岁。我来此陕西省西安市。我在陕西出生，现在也生活在那里。我现在是陕西建设公司的一名司机。我家里有四个人，我爸妈、奶奶和我。我有一个哥哥和两个姐姐。我父母也住西安。我父亲是一个机器设计师。他也在陕西建设公司工作。但是他经常出国，过夜经常出国。我妈妈是一个家庭主妇。她是一个伟大的女人。我从出生就跟我母亲一起住。我非常感谢她对我的培养。我喜欢运动，听音乐，讲英语，并且和和我的朋友在一起。我是一个真诚待人。我很容易相处。我还没有女朋友。OK，我很高兴在这里和你们在一起。因为我的英语不太好。你可以给我一些好的建议吗？我真的非常高兴今天能跟你们在一起。祝愿每个人都有美好的时光。谢谢！