Question

懂点英语的请进，帮我找找我的演讲稿的语法错误，谢谢

这是我写给一个女孩的，
本人英语还可以，于是着手写此文在明天演讲时作为演讲稿
希望大家要认真对待啊
帮我把所有的语法错误和用词不当的地方找出来，谢谢

I thought it's a new outset of my life when I met you. You always wears homely .But I thing you are the most beautiful girl of our school.If someone ask me why.I just tell to them.Maybe it's love to make me feel that.I know. I am too young to talk about love. And I don't want to affect your stedy . So wherever you go and whatever you do . I just want to follow you everwhere and enjoy that by myself. Trust me.I will waiting for you,forever

找得详细的可是会有加分哦~~~

Answer 1

I thought it's a new outset of my life when I met you. You always wear homely clothes. But I think you are the most beautiful girl in our school.If someone asks me why，I will just tell this to them.Maybe it's love to make me feel that way.I know. I am too young to talk about love and I don't want to affect your studies. So wherever you go and whatever you do . I just want to follow you everwhere and enjoy that alone. Trust me.I will be waiting for you,forever