Question

英语单句改错，各句子均有两个错误。

最好有原因解释一下，我定会采纳。

第一个：For our joy,Li Ding,monitor of our class, who was among the winners。
第二个：The only thing I can think is when I am going to get home listen tomy music.
第三个：I communicated myself thanks to his great kindness.
第四个：I get up early this morning to go to the airport to meet Bob，a expert from the USA

第五个：One and a half year later ，I now think English a fun to learn。
第六个：I went through the test for many times but I can only answer three out of the twenty questions

Answer 1

第一个：For our joy,Li Ding,monitor of our class, who was among the winners.
To our joy, Li Ding, monitor of our class, was among the winners
to one's joy 使某人高兴的是...；后面部分都是句子片段，不是完整的句子。第二个：The only thing I can think is when I am going to get home listen to my music.
The only thing I can think of is when I am going to get home and listen to my music.
think思考，think of想到；get 和listen形成连动，需要有相应连接词。
第三个：I communicated myself thanks to his great kindness.
I express thanks for his great kindness.
表达感言：give/express/deliver thanks/gratitude to sb. for sth.
communicate 不与反身代词搭配，communicate with sb.与某人交流沟通
第四个：I get up early this morning to go to the airport to meet Bob，a expert from the USA
I got up early this morning to go to the airport to meet Bob, an expert from the USA.
用过去时更自然；元音开头名词前不定冠词用an

第五个：One and a half year later ，I now think English a fun to learn。
One and a half years later, I now think English fun to learn.
数量超过1，名词需要复数；fun表示有意思的事，为不可数名词。
第六个：I went through the test for many times but I can only answer three out of the twenty questions
I went through the test many times but I could only answer three out of the twenty questions.
many times仅指次数，表示状态，for many times要与完成时态搭配；并列句中时态一致。

Answer 2

第一个：To our joy,Li Ding,monitor of our class, was among the winners。
第二个：The only thing I can think of is when I am going to get home listening to my music.
第三个：I communicated myself thanks to his great kindness.
第四个：I got up early this morning to go to the airport to meet Bob，an expert from USA

第五个：One and a half years later ，I now think English is fun to learn。
第六个：I went through the test many times but I can only answered three out of the twenty questions

Answer 3

第二个：The only thing I can think of is when I am going to get home to listen to my music.
第三个：I communicated to myself thanks to his great kindness. 其他的楼上都正确，就错了两个。