Question

英语短文改错~谢谢了

Mrs.wilson;
Today I will going to buy something,I had ruturning you book to the library.,and Tracy give you phone,he entrust me to give you three message,he said that the missing in Boton Coffee was cancle,this things is notified to Susan,and he said , if you come home please call back him as soon as possible.
That’s all.
Li Hua

Answer 1

1.will going to __will go to (will 后不能加进行式)
此处也可改成will going to __am going to (用的是be going to的句型)
2.had returning ___have returned (重点：很多人不知道怎么区分现在完成时和过去完成时，记住只要句中没有出现表过去的时间状语就不要用过去完成时。并且此便条一开始就说了Today。所以这里应该用一般时态的完成时)
3.you book__your book
4.Tracy give__Trancy gave (Trance的电话是已经打过的，所以应用过去式)
5.three message__three messages(复数)
6.missing ___meeting(不知道可不可以改动原文单词,但如果用Missing意思不通啊)
7.was cancle__had been cancled(首先你看此句中有Said表示了过去的时态。所以应用过去完成时。同时取消应该是被取消，倍动态)
8.is notified__had notified(如果用is就变成了倍动态。而这里显然是主动的)
9.come home __came back home(这里是间接引语，应用相应的过去式。如果变为直接引语。加引号就OK)
10.call back him__call him back(固定的搭配)

够详细吗？

如果可以的话给个最佳把.谢啦.

Answer 2

going→go ruturning→returned you→your give→gave entrust→entrusted message→messages missing →appointment cancle→canceled is→had to去掉

累……

Answer 3

Today
is
my
father's
--birthday---,
so
I
went
out
to
the
store
to
buy
a
present---
for
----my
father.
After
I
picked
out
a
nicer
gift,I
went
back
home.But
at
the
F
station,an
old
lady
got
on
the
subway
where
there
weren't
any
empty
seats.The
old
lady
had
to
stand.-------Having
-----seen
that,I
couldn't
help
but
---------give
up
my
seat
to
her.I
felt
so
------happy------
after
getting
home
because
I
-------had--------
helped
others.I
think
we
should
try
-------our-------
best
to
help
others.And
we
should
--------be-------
polite
and
respectful
to
the
elderly,----which-----
are
----traditional
values.