Question

翻译一句话，机器翻译的免

非常抱歉再次打扰你.
到现在，我仍然没有收到我的Visa Letter。请帮我核实一下我的Visa Letter 具体是在什么时候寄出的，好吗？

（ 英国学校上周说上周内将通过快递把我的Visa letter寄出来，我一直没收到，前几天发邮件问了一下有没有寄出，具体是由哪个快递寄出的，快递号是多少？但没有回复。现在再去写个邮件去问，如果有更好的表达法，最好了）

Answer 1

英国人对客套话永远不嫌烦，这是给学校的信，并且在麻烦别人，需要别人的帮助，说话语气要委婉，客套，并且正式，不能随便，要用please, could ,would等词表现出来。

My sincere apology if this email bothered you in any sense. I am a Chinese student and was admitted to your unviersity this coming fall. I am wondering whether you can check my visa letter status and let me know when it is mailed out.

I was informed last week that my visa letter was delivered through express mail, and I should receive it within 7 days. Unforturnately, I haven't received it till now. Visa letter is very important to me. I need it to finish my paperwork here in China before going to the UK.I wrote an email inquiry several days ago, but not sure whether you received it.

Thank you very much for your assistance!

Answer 2

To Whom It May Be Concerned,

I am sorry to disturb you once again. I have not yet received my VisaLetter. Can you please check and inform me of the delivery time of my Visa Letter? I really appreciate your help.

Kind Regards,
xxxxxxx

Answer 3

I'm sorry to bother you again.
I still haven't got my Visa Letter yet. Could you please check when was it delivered? More information about the delivery will be appreciated.

Your help will be appreciated.=thank you very much
Your prompt reply will be appreciated:盼早复（希望对方尽快回复）

Answer 4

My sincere apology if this email bothered you in any sense. I am a Chinese student and was admitted to your unviersity this coming fall. I am wondering whether you can check my visa letter status and let me know when it is mailed out the
I was informed last week that my visa letter was delivered through express mail, and I should receive it within 7 days. Unforturnately, I haven't received it till now. Visa letter is very important to me. I need it to finish my paperwork here in China before going to the UK.I wrote an email inquiry several days ago, but not sure whether you received it.

Thank you very much for your assistance!

Answer 5

这是给学校的信，并且在麻烦别人，需要别人的帮助，说话语气要委婉，客套，并且正式，不能随便，要用please, could ,would等词表现出来。

I'm so sorry to bother you again.
I have not received my Visa Letter as of today. I'd really appreciate it if you could help me check one more time.
Please help me find out when my Visa Letter was sent.