Question

帮我改一下这篇英语作文，谢谢~

My Friend
My frien name is John.He's my favorite friend.
John is 12 years old.He has big eyes,short hair.He's very naughty,but he's clever,too.His English is very good,but math is not better.He likes play piano,he learned it 8 years ago.He's very kind,so he has many friends.He's my classmaths.
This my friend,John.Do you want meet him?Hes very friendly,too!
拜托各位拉……

Answer 1

读一下吧。。改了

My Friend
My friend's name is John.He's my best(想说最好的朋友就是这个，那个一般不用这种说法) friend.
John is 12 years old.He has big eyes and short hair.He's very naughty,but he's clever.His English is very good,but his math is not good.He likes playing piano,he started to learn it 8 years ago.He's very kind,so he has many friends.He's my classmate.
This my friend,John.Do you want meet him?He's very friendly,too!

Answer 2

我的朋友
我的朋友的名字叫乔治.他是我最好的朋友.
乔治12岁.他有大眼睛，短头发.他很顽皮，但是他很聪明.他的英语很好，但是数学不好.他喜欢弹钢琴，他学了8年.他很和善，所以他有很多好朋友.他是我的同班同学.
这是我的朋友，乔治.你想认识他吗？他很友好！

Answer 3

再改

My Friend
My friend's name is John.He's my best(想说最好的朋友就是这个，那个一般不用这种说法) friend.
John is 12 years old.He has big eyes and short hair.He's very naughty,but he's clever.His English is very good,but his math is not so good.He likes playing piano,and he started to learn it 8 years ago.He's very kind,so he has many friends.He's my classmate.
This my friend,John.Do you want to meet him?He's very friendly,too!