Question

求一份英文的自我介绍．过两天要去一个5星酒店面试前台．．英文翻译高手请进

我叫**．毕业于北京联合大学．专业是网络安全．我的性格外向、为人热情、开朗、诚实，工作主动,恪守职业道德．
在校期间在麦当劳做前台收银工作三个月．结业后在匡威专卖做导购直到现在．本人具备团队协作能力,组织管理沟通能力强，客户服务意识强，具有完善的中文语言口头和书面表达能力．
今天到贵酒店面试前台，希望给予我这个机会，为贵酒店工作

谢谢．

麻烦英文写作高手协助．目前悬赏分数10分．最后答案追加满分．拜托了

Answer 1

My name isXXXX, graduated from the Beijing Union University.I am professional in network security.
I am an extrovert with passion in my job. I am a honest person and is abide by professional ethics.
I had been working as a cashier at McDonald's for three months during my schooldays and is working as a shopping guider at Converse now.
I have strong communication skills, organizational management,strong sense of customer service and is willing to co-operate with teamates.Beside these, I am good in comprehensive oral and written Chinese language.
I am interviewing in this Hotel today because I hope that I can have the opportunity to work in this Hotel.
Thank you for your patience.

怪怪的。。。好像不十分正式。。敢情您是去大酒店应征？那还是找过来人再修改修改吧。我这都是直接翻译，没什么正式的敬语。

不过，楼上那2个您也别用，是挺专业的，就是语法错了一堆，感觉上是机器直议的。（我真是好人，还人工来）反正我是没看懂啦。

Answer 2

我叫**．毕业于北京联合大学．专业是网络安全．我的性格外向、为人热情、开朗、诚实，工作主动,恪守职业道德．
在校期间在麦当劳做前台收银工作三个月．结业后在匡威专卖做导购直到现在．本人具备团队协作能力,组织管理沟通能力强，客户服务意识强，具有完善的中文语言口头和书面表达能力．
今天到贵酒店面试前台，希望给予我这个机会，为贵酒店工作

谢谢．

My name **. He graduated from Beijing Union University. Network security professional. My outgoing personality, his enthusiasm, cheerful, honest, proactive work and abide by professional ethics.

At school during the Cashier at McDonald's for three months to do. Converse monopoly after the closure guide so far. I have the teamwork ability, strong communication skills, organizational management, a strong sense of customer service, with comprehensive oral and written English language communication skills.

To your interview today, the hotel front desk, I want to give this opportunity to work for your hotel

thank you.

Answer 3

I call * * *, graduated from Beijing union university. Major is network security. My disposition extroversion, passionate, open-minded, honest and initiative, abide by professional ethics.
During the period of school in McDonald's in front of the cashier made three months after graduation. Now do all the monopoly. I have until his team cooperation ability, organization and management skill, client service and communication skill, and strong Chinese language, oral and written expression ability.
Today to your hotel receptionist, want to interview me this opportunity, to your hotel

Thank you.

Answer 4

My name **. Igraduated from Beijing Union University.
Network security professional. My outgoing personality, enthusiasm, cheerful, honest, proactive work and abide by professional ethics.
At school during the Cashier at McDonald's for three months to do. Converse monopoly after the closure guide so far. I have the teamwork ability, strong communication skills, organizational management, a strong sense of customer service, with comprehensive oral and written English language communication skills.
To your interview today, the hotel front desk, I want to give this opportunity to work for your hotel