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Inmyview,theInternetishelpful.Itisknowntoall,theInternetisplayingaimportantpartinourd...
In my view,the Internet is helpful.It is known to all,the Internet is playing a important part in our daily life.On the Internet,we can read news home and abroad and got as much information as we can,we can also attend to the net school and read many books.We can even do shopping online.bestide,our ability to operater the computer can be improved geart.So we should not be addicted to the Internet,or we will get our life and study destroying.In addition,we should keep off the harmful webesite.Anyhow,this doesn't prevent the Internet from becoming our friend
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In my view,the Internet is helpful.It is known to all,the Internet is playing 【a】 important part in our daily life.On the Internet,we can read news 【home】 and abroad and 【got】 as much information as we can,we can also attend 【to】 the net school and read many books.We can even do shopping online.【bestide】,our ability to 【operater】 the computer can be improved 【geart】.【So】 we should not be addicted to the Internet,or we will get our life and study 【destroying】.In addition,we should keep off 【the harmful webesite】.Anyhow,this doesn't prevent the Internet from becoming our friend.
1、a 改为 an
2、home 之前加 at
3、got 改为 get
4、删除to
5、beside 改为 Besides
6、operater 改为 operate
7、great 改为 greatly
8、So 改为 But
9、destroying 改为 destroyed
10、 the harmful website 改为 harmful websites （泛指的website，不用定冠词，但要用复数形式）
1、a 改为 an
2、home 之前加 at
3、got 改为 get
4、删除to
5、beside 改为 Besides
6、operater 改为 operate
7、great 改为 greatly
8、So 改为 But
9、destroying 改为 destroyed
10、 the harmful website 改为 harmful websites （泛指的website，不用定冠词，但要用复数形式）
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