Question

my best friend

朋友在我们的生活中是非常重要的一部分。朋友使我们的生活更加精彩,让我们的生活充满了温暖.我有很多朋友.但是我最好的朋友是xxx。我们从小一起长大，认识已经20年了。她比我小一岁，但是在生活与学习方面她总是在照顾我，我们从小学到中学都是同一个班级，她喜欢学习并且很擅长，我们彼此帮助，当我遇到麻烦时她总是帮助我，我希望能多帮助她一些，现在我们都有各自的事儿要忙，见面的时间也少了，我相信我们的友谊会到永远。拜托那位帮帮忙，标点符号帮我好好弄弄，还有适当帮我加几句有水平的活谢谢了，快快快，我现在就想要，谢谢了！

Answer 1

Friends ara important in our life.Friends make our life more wonderful,it warms our life.I have many friends,but my best friend is ***.we group tpgether,we have been together for 20 years.She is one year younger than I,but she always helps me in study.we were in the same class from primary school until middle school.She is good at studying,and we help each other,when I am in trouble,she alwys helps me,I hope I can help she a lot.Now she has her work,and I have my work,and we meet less.I beilive our friendship can be forever!
我可是真的自己照着你的汉语写的啊，可能写的不是很好，将就吧！

Answer 2

Friend in our lives is a very important part. Friend to make our lives more exciting, so that our lives are full of warmth. There is a lot of my friends. But are my best friend xxx. We grew up together since childhood, has been recognized for 20 years. Her small one-year-old than I, but in life and learning, she always take care of me, we have from elementary school to middle school are the same Class,We assist each other, when my trouble, she always helped me, I would like to assist her many, and now we have their own things to busy, time to meet fewer and fewer, I believe our friendship will go to Forever .

Answer 3

A friend is a person who can let you feel warm when you are depressed.So I have many friends.But XXX is my best friend.He is as old as me.He taller than me.Basketball is his favorite sport.We are in the same class.He is good at study.So his study is very good.We learn from each other and help each other.He will help me if i got in trouble.I will help he as much as I can. I hope our friendship will forever and ever.

A friend is someone who can let you feel warm when you are depressed. I have many friends. However I only have one best friend and it's XXX. He is the same age as me. He is taller than me. Basketball is his favourite sport. We are in the same class. He likes studying and is good at it, so he gets high marks. We learn from each other and help each other. He will help me if I ever get into troubles. So will I. I hope our friendship will last forever and ever.

A person改成someone更好一些,someone也是一个人的意思,但是更正规些.So可以删掉.But XXX is my best friend.我改成了However I only have one best friend and it's XXX.但是我只有一个最好的朋友,他是XXX.他比我高的那句话里要加个is.后面有的地方我也稍微修改了一下.最后一句话我加了个last,直接说forever的话不通顺.

Answer 4

Friends in our life is very important part. Friends make our life more exciting, let our life is full of warm. I have a lot of friends. But my best friend is XXX. We grew up together, has 20 years. She's one year younger than me, but in her life and learning, we always take care of my childhood in the secondary school is the same class, she likes to learn, and very good, we help each other, when I was in trouble, she always helps me, I wish I could help her some, now we have their business to meet, the less time, I believe our friendship will forever.

Answer 5

Friends in our life is a very important part. Friends make our life more exciting, let our life is full of warm. I have a lot of friends. But my best friend is XXX. We grew up together, we know eachother 20 years ago. She's one year younger than me, but in her life and learning, we always take care of my childhood in the secondary school is the same class, she likes to learn, and very good, we help each other, when I was in trouble, she always helps me, I wish I could help her some, now we have their business to do,and seldom meet. But I believe our friendship will lasts forever.