Question

谁能帮我看看这篇英语作文（非常急，谢谢了）

Hello every one. I am very glad to be here and introduce myself to you.
My name is Huangsong. I am 11 years old this year.I am an outgoing andfriendy girl. In my spare time. I like reading novels.I think reading could enlarge my knowledge.I like to keep pets.I like animals very much.Because animals are not only beautiful , but also interesting. Animals are natural resources.Animals are our friends.So we must protect them.Today,my topic is about animals'love.

请大家帮我看看这篇演讲稿里有什么词法语法运用错误，然后帮忙改改。我要得很急，今天就要，明天要比赛了。谢谢大家！我感激不尽

Answer 1

错误不多，修改后如下：
Hello ,every one. I am very glad to be here and introduce myself to you.
My name is Huangsong. I am 11 years old this year.I am an outgoing and friendy girl. In my spare time. I like reading novels.I think reading can increase my knowledge.I like keeping pets.I like animals very much.Because animals are not only cute , but also interesting. Animals are natural resources.And animals are also our friends.So we should protect them.Today,my topic is about animals'love.
祝你比赛取得好成绩！