Question

英语高手帮我翻译一下

顺便看看哪里还需要修改的~~在线等
To my dearest myself

Hello, I’m you who came from five year ago. At that moment, you weren’t mature and even a bit childish. At the moment, you’re still gazing the sky and facing the confusions of life and work.

During these five years, have you been changed into unreal, however, to my dearest myself, I hope that you can keep the purity. If you lose it again, you won’t find it back.

To you, you must keep fit hard, your body decides the length and quality of your life.
This is an absolutely truth for you coming from five years ago without any query, so are you.

Five-year-time is not a short period for a working person, it’s more like a cycle. No matter how much you’ve learn, you’ll put them on and march with them.
To you, have you been qualified with your work, as though you’re still incompetent for
you job. However, I don’t think that you’re an indolent child, so you must achieve better via your struggling.
Though I have a lot to say, in one word, to my dearest me, wish you could keep a kind heart and become more excellent in five years time.

Answer 1

给我最亲爱的自己
你好，我是你五年前的你。那一刻，你还不成熟，甚至有点幼稚。此刻，你还在凝视天空，面对生活和学习中的困惑。
在这五年里，你变成了不真实的自己，但是，我最亲爱的自己，我希望你能保持纯洁。如果你再失去它，你就不会找到它。
对你来说，你必须保持身体的健康，你的身体决定你生命的长短和质量。
这是一个绝对的真理，所以你从五年前没有任何质疑。
五年的时间不是一个学习的时间，它更像一个周期。不管你学了多少，你会把它们放在一起，然后与他们一起前进。
对你，你有资格学习，但是你仍然不努力学习
你在学习上。然而，我并不认为你是一个懒惰的孩子，所以你必须通过你的努力达到更好的成绩。
虽然我有很多话要说，一个字，对我最亲爱的我，希望你能保持一个善良的心，并在这五年里成为更优秀的。