As a schoolboy,I saved money from my
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As a schoolboy,I saved money from myAs a schoolboy,I saved money from my weekly pocket money and my job of
delivering newspapers so that I can buy more coins.
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delivering newspapers so that I can buy more coins.
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表达有点不清。so that从句含情态动词是目的状语,根据意思应该是结果状语,所以应去掉that变成表示结果的并列句。试改如下供参考:
As a schoolboy,I have some money from my part-time job of delivering newspapers besides my weekly pocket money so I can buy more coins。作为学生除了每周的零花钱外我还有一些业余卖报纸挣的钱,因此我能买更多的硬币。
如果后面是表达目的状语,可以改成:
As a schoolboy,I have saved some money from my part-time job of delivering newspapers besides my weekly pocket money so that I can buy more coins。
作为学生我积攒了我业余卖报纸的钱和每周的零花钱以便我能买更多的硬币。
As a schoolboy,I have some money from my part-time job of delivering newspapers besides my weekly pocket money so I can buy more coins。作为学生除了每周的零花钱外我还有一些业余卖报纸挣的钱,因此我能买更多的硬币。
如果后面是表达目的状语,可以改成:
As a schoolboy,I have saved some money from my part-time job of delivering newspapers besides my weekly pocket money so that I can buy more coins。
作为学生我积攒了我业余卖报纸的钱和每周的零花钱以便我能买更多的硬币。
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and my job…………newspapers做什么成分?
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saved money from my weekly pocket money①
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(saved money ) from my job of delivering newspaper②
和前面的①并列
saved money from my weekly pocket money①
and
(saved money from) my job of delivering newspaper②
和前面的①并列
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