Question

求高手帮忙做英语题 急！

高手帮忙做一下英语改错题 老师明天讲 正确75%的给分 说一下具体怎么改 在括号里 垃圾自重 谢谢了 改错题如下
Dear Editor,
I'm a middle school student naming Li Ming .I'm writing to tell
1.( )
you something .Recent noticed that many for my classmates often
2.( )
go to the cybercafe near our school,I went there too in
3.( ) the other day.I was surprised to see so many students play computer
4.( )
games,watching movies or chatting online .Some students were even
5.( )
talking about love affairs online
On my opinion,the cybercafe should be a place where we can
6.( )
find many useful information.The Internet should be a window
7.( )
to the outside world rather than place for games .The Internet is
8.( )
good unless we make good use of it.Otherwise,it will cause lots of
problems 9.( )
I suggest that the goverment would take measures to 10.( )
make sure that students use the cybercafe properly.
Yours,
Li Ming

Answer 1

1，named 2，for改为of 3，去掉in 4，playing 5，or改为and 6，On改为In 7，many改为much 8，is后面加not 9，√ 10，would改为should，或者直接去掉would。

Answer 2

Dear Editor,
I'm a middle school student naming Li Ming .I'm writing to tell
1.( naming 改成named )
you something .Recent noticed that many for my classmates often
2.(Recent 改成 Recent ly )
go to the cybercafe near our school,I went there too in
3.( in 去掉 ) the other day.I was surprised to see so many students play computer
4.( play 改成playing )
games,watching movies or chatting online .Some students were even
5.( 这个不会 )
talking about love affairs online
On my opinion,the cybercafe should be a place where we can
6.( On 改成In )
find many useful information.The Internet should be a window
7.(many改much成 )
to the outside world rather than place for games .The Internet is
8.( 在place前面加 a )
good unless we make good use of it.Otherwise,it will cause lots of
problems 9.( unless 改成if )
I suggest that the goverment would take measures to 10.( would改should成 )
make sure that students use the cybercafe properly.
Yours,
Li Ming