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According to the chart, Australian gets qualifications after graduating from high schools is quite different between man and woman in1999.
There were five levels of diploma. As we can see that males who got skilled vocational diploma were make up about ninety percent of the total amount, when women only had one ninth of the men’ rate. With the education level increased, the males seemed to get higher diploma more than females. At the level of postgraduate and master, the percentage of males was 70%, which is two times as many as the rate of females.
On the contrary, about this level, the women held more qualifications than men, where they had nearly make up seventy percent of undergraduate diploma, and less than 60% of bachelor’ degree.
My major conclusion was that after graduating from high schools men were willing to study skilled capacity instead of knowledgement. However women were, more or less, chosen to college diploma.

Answer 1

大体看了一下。还不错。6.5到7左右吧。
但是雅思作文的重点是大作文。

Answer 2

5.5 数据太少 结尾那句话...不要这么说！看看例文吧

Answer 3

6分左右