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英语高手进来帮下忙~~看看这几句翻译对不对~~

这是在爱词霸在线翻译上翻译的...总觉得有点不对...能帮我改一下么？？？
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今天让我带大家去苏州摩天轮乐园游玩。
Today, let me take you to Suzhou park Ferris wheel play.
在入口处，你会看见一座非常漂亮的城堡
At the entrance, you will see a very beautiful castle
我们首先去玩旋转木马，这里的旋转木马很特别，分为上下两层，可以同方向转动，也可以反方向转动，骑在这样的旋转木马上，就好像身处梦幻场景，实在是太令人向往了。
We first play merry, merry-go-here is very special, is divided into upper and lower layers, you can rotate the same direction, you can also rotate in the opposite direction, riding in such a merry-go-on, just like living in fantasy scenes, is too make who aspire to the.

在旋转木马前面是秋千，在以飞翔为主题的摩天轮公园，梦幻秋千是最明媚的一笔，浪漫唯美的梦幻秋千，让欢快的笑声点亮星空，动感的裙摆随风飘扬，最炫幻的幸福将你缠绕
In the merry-go-front of the swing, in order to fly the Ferris wheel as the theme park, fantasy of a swing is the most beautiful, romantic aesthetic dream swing so cheerful laughter lit the night sky dynamic skirt flapping in the wind, the most Hyun winding your well-being of magic
在苏州摩天轮乐园，你不能错过的就是摩天轮了，这是以“幸福”为主题的全国最大的水上摩天轮，在摩天轮上俯瞰苏州摩天轮乐园是多么浪漫的事
Ferris wheel park in Suzhou, you can not miss is the Ferris wheel, and this is the "happiness" as the theme of the country's largest water wheel in the Ferris wheel Ferris wheel overlooking the park in Suzhou matter how romantic
然后让我们体验一下惊险的过山车，这是世界第一台悬挂式飞行过山车，坐上去让你像鸟儿一样自在飞翔，感受最惊险的幸福
And then let us experience the thrill of the roller coaster, which is the world's first suspended roller coaster flight, get on to let you fly like a bird as comfortable and feel the happiness of the most thrilling
最后让我们去儿童迷宫，这是全部由绿化植物构成的迷宫——绿野迷踪，这是一个富有童趣的地方
Finally, let us go to children's maze, which is composed entirely of green plants maze - green Behind, this is a place rich playful element

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Today, let me take you to Suzhou park Ferris wheel play.
play前面加to,表示目的，否则一个句子2动词了～
special, is divided into
把逗号改成and,逗号没有连接并列成分的功能～
you can rotate the same direction
rotate后面加in,它不及物，况且方向的搭配介词是in
riding in such a merry-go-on, just like living
just前面加is...like当像讲的时候，是介词，要用be引导

in fantasy scenes, is too make who aspire to the.
这部分似乎特别的错！改成 secenes,which almost everyone is longing for

后面就乱了～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～我给你大改一下好了……

在旋转木马前面是秋千，在以飞翔为主题的摩天轮公园，梦幻秋千是最明媚的一笔，浪漫唯美的梦幻秋千，让欢快的笑声点亮星空，动感的裙摆随风飘扬，最炫幻的幸福将你缠绕
In the merry-go-front of the swing, as the theme of park is to fly, Fantasy Swing is the most beautiful, romantic aesthetic scene.Dream swing is so cheerful that laughter lit the night sky .Dynamic skirt flaps in the wind, the magic of happiness will surround you
在苏州摩天轮乐园，你不能错过的就是摩天轮了，这是以“幸福”为主题的全国最大的水上摩天轮，在摩天轮上俯瞰苏州摩天轮乐园是多么浪漫的事
In Ferris wheel park in Suzhou, what you can not miss is the Ferris wheel, and this is the biggest one with the theme of happiness in the country.How romantic it is to overlook the park in Suzhou!
然后让我们体验一下惊险的过山车，这是世界第一台悬挂式飞行过山车，坐上去让你像鸟儿一样自在飞翔，感受最惊险的幸福
And then let us experience the thrill of the roller coaster, which is the world's first suspended roller coaster flight.Getting on to makes feel you fly like a bird and the most frightening happiness.
最后让我们去儿童迷宫，这是全部由绿化植物构成的迷宫——绿野迷踪，这是一个富有童趣的地方
Finally, let us go to children's maze, which is composed entirely of green plants maze - green Behind, this is a place rich in playful element.

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