Question

高一英语短文改错

短文改错（共有10处错误）
The story took place in Amsterdam, Holland in early 1940s after the German Nazis had occupied most of Europe. The Nazi party ruled German from1933 to 1945. One of their key policy was to kill all the Jews in Europe.If any persons known to be Jews was found ,they would be send to concentration camps farther east,most in Poland.Families were separated but transported in trains .For much days,they go without food,water,sanitation or fresh air.To avoid this terrible fate ,some Jewish families went into hiding,often under the help of non-Jewish friends.

Answer 1

The story took place in Amsterdam, Holland in (定冠词 the) early 1940s after the German Nazis had occupied most of Europe. The Nazi party ruled German (德国应该用 Germany) from 1933 to 1945. One of their key policy (应该用复数 policies) was to kill all the Jews in Europe.If any persons known to be Jews was(应该用复数 were) found ,they would be send (被动式sent) to concentration camps farther east,most (应该是副词 mostly) in Poland. Families were separated but （表示并列应该用and） transported in trains .For much (可数名次用 many 修饰) days,they go (过去式 went) without food,water,sanitation or fresh air.To avoid this terrible fate ,some Jewish families went into hiding,often under (应该用with，固定搭配) the help of non-Jewish friends.

全文正确的说法是：

This is a true story. It took place in Amsterdam, Holland in the early 1940s after the German Nazis had occupied most of Europe. The Nazi Party ruled Germany from 1933 to 1945. One of their key policies was to kill all the Jews in Europe. If any persons known to be Jews were found, they would be sent to concentration camps farther east, mostly in Poland. Families were separated and transported in trains. For many days, they went without food, water, sanitation or fresh air. To avoid this terrible fate, some Jewish families went into hiding, often with the help of non-Jewish friends This diary was written during the time when Anne and her family moved to escape from being killed by Nazis.

Answer 2

The story took place in Amsterdam, Holland in 【the】early 1940s after the German Nazis had occupied most of Europe. The Nazi party ruled German【Germany】 from1933 to 1945. One of their key policy【policies】 was to kill all the Jews in Europe.If any persons known to be Jews was【were】found ,they would be send 【sent】to concentration camps farther east,most【mostly】 in Poland.Families were separated but【and】 transported in trains .For much【many】 days,they go【went】 without food,water,sanitation or fresh air.To avoid this terrible fate ,some Jewish families went into hiding,often under【with】 the help of non-Jewish friends.

Answer 3

policy - policies
persons - people
known to be Jews - to去掉
send - sent
farther east - far east
but - and
in - by
much - many
go - went
under - with

不敢保证全对 至少手工一个个做的 给你做个参考吧

Answer 4

第二行。Europe前加the German 改成Germany
第三行，policy 改成policies persons 改成person
第四行，they 改成he send 改成sent
第五行 but 改成and. much改成many
第六行 or 改成and
第七行 into 改成to

Answer 5

我给你改出来并解释了，保证10000%100的准确率：
The story took place in Amsterdam, Holland in the（定冠词）early 1940s,after the German Nazis had occupied most of Europe. The Nazi party ruled Germany（国家） from 1933 to 1945. One of their key policies（复数） was to kill all the Jews in Europe.If any persons known to be Jews were（主谓一致）found ,they would be sent（被动形式） to concentration camps farther east,mostly（副词） in Poland.Families were separated and（并列关系） transported in trains .For many（可数名词用） days,they went（过去式） without food,water,sanitation or fresh air.To avoid this terrible fate ,some Jewish families went into hiding,often with（固定用法） the help of non-Jewish friends.

Answer 6

担心别人给你的答案不完全正确，心里多少还是没底对不对？我给你找到题目的原文了，保证100%正确，o(∩_∩)o...哈哈。这道题目来自一篇阅读材料：

The story took place in Amsterdam, Holland in the early 1940s after the German Nazis had occupied most of Europe. The Nazis Party ruled Germany from 1933 to 1945. One of their key policies was to kill all the Jews in Europe. If any persons known to be Jews were found, they would be sent to concentration camps farther east, mostly in Poland.
Families were separated and transported in trains. For many days, they went without food, water, sanitation or fresh air. To avoid this terrible fate, some Jewish families went into hiding, often with the help of non-Jewish friends.（后面的权作参考吧，你的题目里面没有出现）This diary was written during the time when Anne and her family moved to escape from being killed by Nazis.

我就不详细解释了，慢慢品味吧，^_^。