Question

帮忙看看我的英语语法有问题没?谢谢,特别是缺冠词的地方,呵呵

汉语意思:典型温度下试验研究了太阳电池阵结构材料的疲劳特性，分析了这些材料疲劳性能的温度效应.
英文:The
fatigue properties of structural materials of solar panel at typical temperature
were studied in this paper. The temperature effect of fatigue properties of
these materials was analyzed.

Answer 1

temperature应改为temperatures.而且第一句中连用of不如改为这样The fatigue properties of solar panel's structural materials at typical temperatures...

Answer 2

This paper studied the fatigue properties of structural materials of solar panel at typical temperature, analyzing the temperature effect of fatigue properties of
these materials. 我们一般这么翻译，看着比较专业。