Question

我是一个初一的学生，我写了三篇英语作文，请各位大神帮忙找一下错。

Every has different likes and dislikes. I have them too. Now, let me tell you about my likes and dislikes.
For meals, I have some healthy eating habits. I like eating noodles for breakfast because I think they are delicious. I don’t like cracker because I don’t think they’re clean. For lunch and dinner, I want to have food at home. I don’t want to eat fast food because I think it’s bad for my health.
Then, I want to tell you about my sports habits. I like playing ping-pong because it is easy for me.But I think playing basketball is too difficult so I don’t want to play basketball.
These are my likes and dislikes. How about you?

I have lots of teacher and my favorite one is Ms.Tian.
Ms.Tian is my history teacher. She teaches well and she alw- ays kind to us. She usually tell to us some useful stories. So I th- ink her classes is interesting and she is a good teacher.

Do you want to buy beautiful clothes? Do you want to buy fresh food? Do you want to buy useful books? Now, you can go to the Xinhua Store and buy your needs
For clothes,the primary price of the black is 1000 yuan, but the price of the black sweater is100 yuan now! All socks are on sale, two pairs is only 1 yuan. For food, we have cheap fruit. A kilo of bananas is 2 yuan and 2 kilos of bananas are 3 yuan. For books, we gave English-Chinese dictionaries for 30 yuan and they are too useful for your study.
Let’s buy our needs at Xinhua Store now! Come on!

Answer 1

Everyone has different likes and dislikes. I have them too. Now, let me tell you about my likes and dislikes.
For eating, I have some healthy eating habits. I like eating noodles for breakfast because I think they are delicious. I don’t like cracker because I don’t think they’re clean. For lunch and dinner, I want to have food at home. I don’t want to eat fast food because I think it’s bad for my health.
Then, I want to tell you about my sports habits. I like playing ping-pong because it is easy for me.But I think playing basketball is too difficult to I don’t want to play basketball.
These are my likes and dislikes. How about you?

I have lots of teacher and my favorite one is Ms.Tian.
Ms.Tian is my history teacher. She teaches well and she always kind to us. She usually tell us some useful stories. So I think her lesson is interesting and she is a good teacher.

Do you want to buy some beautiful clothes? Do you want to buy fresh food? Do you want to buy useful books? Now, you can go to the Xinhua Store and buy your needs
For clothes,the primary price of the black is 1000 yuan, but the price of the black sweater is100 yuan now! All socks are on sale, two pairs is only 1 yuan. For food, we have cheap fruit. A kilo of bananas is 2 yuan and 2 kilos of bananas are 3 yuan. For books, we gave English-Chinese dictionaries for 30 yuan and they are too useful for your study.
Let’s buy our needs at Xinhua Store now! Come on!

追问

.能不能指出哪里错了，我懒得看

追答

你抄我的就好了 我帮你改好了
因为你说你初中生 我只帮你改正到初中水平
大学生一枚 准备考四级

Answer 2

第一篇第一个单词Everyone更合适一点

第

二篇第二行应为She always tells us...,第三行Her classes are ...
第三篇第四行two pairs are

Answer 3

Everyone/Everybody has different likes and dislikes。 every只有每个的意思。

Answer 4

Everyone/Everybody has different likes and dislikes。 every只有每个的意思。

She usually tell to us some useful stories. tell后面加s
I have lots of teacher teacher后面加s