Question

英语改错急

Throughout my high school year there was an area calling the outdoor classroom.When I graduated,the teacher took care of the area had to be taken back to surgery.not thinking twice i told him that i would take care of the area for that summer.she insists on paying me,but i would take her money.i have been taking well care of that area for 3 years now for her.every year she asks me why i do this for her but i tell her it is the least i can do to for a teacher and a school i love.may all the students come to loving the outdoor classroom like i have.

Answer 1

第一句就两个错。。。Throughout my high school YEARS there was an area CALLED the outdoor class room. AFTER I graduated, the teacher THAT took care of the area HAD TO LEAVE FOR A SURGERY, AND NO LONGER COULD TEND TO THE CLASSROOM. Not thinking twice, I told HER that I would take care of the area FOR HER WHILE SHE IS AWAY. She insisted on paying me, but I WOULD NOT take her money. I have been taking well care of the OUTDOOR CLASSROOM for THREE years now. Every year she asks me why DO I do this for her, AND I tell her THAT it is the least I can do FOR THE TEACHER AND SCHOOL THAT I LOVE. I HOPE THAT THE INCOMING students WILL love the outdoor classroom like THE WAY I DID.

所有大写部分都是我改动过的。你有很多语法和单词用错了。

Answer 2

1.  high school year改变high school years
   

2. took care of改为in charge of 

3. be taken back to-go back for

4. not thinking twice-Without thinking twice

5. She insisted

6. would not

7. she asked

8. have been doing

9. the least I can do for a teacher

10. come to love ...like I do

    另，所有句子首写字母大写

Answer 3

In my high school, there was an area called the outdoor classroom. I often went there for my interest and pleasure. When I graduated, the teacher took care of the area, because she had to take a surgery operation. Not thinking twice, I agreed and promised to take care of it that summer. She insisted on paying me, but i would not take her money. Up to now, I have been taking well care of it for 3 years. Every year she asks me why i do this for her. I tell her it is the least i can do to for a teacher and a school that i love. I hope all students would come to love the outdoor classroom.