Question

It rained heavy on sunday moring. I got up early and arrive at the home for

It rained heavy on sunday moring. I got up early and arrive at the home for children without parents as usually .As soon as I entered there, all the children came up to me and everyone looked very exciting .In the morning I taught him an English song calling Twinkle ,Twinkle ,Little Star .In the afernoon we prepared the birthday patry what was to be held at suooertime for little Joe .The children had a very pleasant time,but I felt very happy !How I hope more and more people can to help these poor ,lovely children!
找出十处错误地方
谢谢suooertime是suppertime

Answer 1

错误如下（ ->后面为修改后的单词 ）：
1）heavy->heavily(天下着大雨，应该用heavily副词修饰)
2）arrive->arrived（原句中使用arrive动词原形与文章前后时态不匹配）
3）exciting->excited(exciting与excited区别：前者是动名词表示“使人兴奋”之意；excited是过去分词，表示“兴奋”之意，根据文章意思应该用后者，做表语。)
4）him->them（根据意思就是教大家唱歌，应该用第三人称复数的宾格them）
5）calling->called（一般表示一首歌或是别的东西叫什么，后面部分是做定语，用call时应该用它的过去分词形式called+内容，这是一个习惯用法。）
6）what->that/which(句中party后面是一个定语从句，表事物的引导词在此应该为that或which)
7）was to be ->was（举行party，用了被动语态，其一般构成式为be+动词过去分词，此句中be是was，后面不用to be，直接跟held。）
8）suooertime->suppertime（表示晚餐时间应该为suppertime）

9）but->and（联系上下意思，没有转折之意，前后应为并列关系，故用and连接。）

10）can to->can（can在此是情态动词，直接跟动词原形，to是多余的。）

(Mekbo【麦客博】)