Question

一道英语题，错在哪？

Mr.Wang, he is a native in Beijing(他是地道的北京人），has become a successful businessman in New York.这个句子，错在哪？
请大家说详细点，也就是说出语法错爱哪？

Answer 1

二楼说的对。
应该这么说：
Mr.Wang, a native in Beijing，has become a successful businessman in New York.

这里 a native in Beijing作一个非限制性定语来说明王先生是一个地道的北京人。而MR Wang has become……才是句子主干。

Answer 2

一个句子哪里两个动词？反正错一踏糊涂，改都不好改

Answer 3

Mr wang后面不能再接一个主谓结构,应该把he改为who或that引导的定语从句修饰主语.

Answer 4

Mr.Wang who is a native in Beijing has become a successful businessman in New York

Answer 5

Mr.Wang, a native in Beijing，has become a successful businessman in New York.

Answer 6

he要改who才行，作为非限制性定语从句的引导词。