高分求大神帮忙翻译我的个人陈述，非常着急，谢谢了！
我叫是一名就读于XX国际商务专业的学生，我叫XXX。我想申请XX大学XX专业。我出生于中国一个普通家庭，在我成长的过程中，我的父亲在一个企业中做管理工作，我的母亲在家照顾我的起居。受到父亲的影响，我从小就对商业和管理有很大的兴趣，希望以后能学习和管理有关的专业从事和管理有关的职业。父亲非常支持我，从小就教给我一些有关管理的知识，对我抱有非常高的期望。
我性格温和，喜欢交朋友，几乎没有和别人发生过冲突。我爱好健身，羽毛球，台球，还喜欢摄影，我希望能走遍世界各地并且拍摄美丽的照片留作纪念，可以给身边的每一个人讲述这些地方。
在大学期间，我认真的完成了我的学业，并且在管理类的科目取得了不错的成绩，例如人力资源管理。在XX课中也在制作了两个公司的对比和分析的PPT并且演讲后得到了不错的成绩。并且在口语发音和清晰程度上得到了老师的认可。
在大学的假期我曾多次做过兼职，，例如在商场的销售工作，在连锁餐厅的服务工作。通过这些不同类型的兼职工作我得到了很多经验，学会了很多销售技巧，突发事件处理技巧和与人沟通的技巧，这些工作同时也给我带来的不少人际关系，为我将来的学习和工作带来更多的便利。
我选择留学的国家是英国，因为从初中刚开始了解这个国家开始，我就喜欢上了这个国家，我认为英国的文化让英国人非常绅士，有礼貌。我喜欢英国便利的交通，世界一流的地铁系统，喜欢英国有高楼林立，经济发达的大都市，也有自然环境优雅，生活节奏慢的小镇。同时，英国的教育在世界都是领先的，我认为如果可以在英国学习，我将学到更多有用的知识和技能。
选择这个专业因为我从小就很喜欢这个专业，并且我在XX大学HND项目学习了三年这个专业，我希望未来的工作也会和我学的专业有关。而选择这个学校因为我通过各方面的了解，了解到这所学校在商业管理方面有不错的成绩，而且学校的环境和地理位置都非常吸引我，所以这更加坚定了我选择这所学校。
我希望如果我能成功得到在这所学校学习的资格，我将认真完成学业，完成每一项任务，获得更多的专业知识，尽量以更好的成绩毕业。同时，我还希望能够在这所学校攻读研究生学位来更多的提升自己。
如果能在贵校学习将会是我的荣幸，期待你们的答复，谢谢你们！
麻烦帮我翻译成英文的，真的很着急，今天就要递交的。 展开
I am student who studies XX International Business. My name is XXX. I want to apply XX University XX faculty. I was born in an ordinary family in China. In my growing up, my father worked in management department of a company, and my mother took care of my daily life at home. Affected by my father, I was interested in business and management since when I was young. I really hope that I can learn something and work at some places that related to management in the future.
I am very gentle guy (/girl), who loves making friends. I have almost never had any conflicts with other people. During my spare time, I like to work out, such as play badminton and table tennis. I also like to take some photographs. I hope I can travel the world some day, take photos of beautiful places as souvenirs, and talk to everyone about these places.
In my university time, I finished my homework seriously, and I also got good grades in management type of courses, such as Human Resources Management. Furthermore, I got a pretty good achievement in making and presenting PPT of comparison andanalysis of two companies. And, I got acknowledged of my oral pronunciation andclarity from teachers.
During vacations in university, I have worked in many different places, such as sales in markets and waiters (/waitresses) in restaurants.Through these work experiences, I learned many skills of sales, such as how to deal with accident and how to communicate withothers. At the same time, these work brought me relations with a lot of people,which has many benefits such as making my future study and work a lot easier.
I choose to study in the United Kingdom. I started to like this country since when I just began high school. I think people in this country are very gentle and polite by its tradition. I like how traffic in the United Kingdom is convenient, it has word’s best subway systems. I like those high buildings there. It is an economically well-developed country and a beautiful environment with slow pace of life. At the same time, education there is also in the lead of the world. If I have the opportunity to study in the United Kingdom in the future, I will learn more useful knowledge and skills.
I choose this faculty because I like it since when I was little, and I have studied this for three years in HND Program of XX University. I hope my future work can relate to the faculty that I have studied. I choose this school after knowing many different sides of it, such as its great achievements in management, its peaceful environment and place in this area. These really attract me and make me feel more firmly of choosing this school.
If I have the opportunity to get admitted to this school successfully, I will study hard, finish every task, learn more knowledge of this faculty, and try my best to get a better achievement by the time that I graduate. At the same time, I also hope that I can go to this school for postgraduate education to further improve myself.
It will be my honor if I really get in this school. I am looking forward to your reply. Thank you so much.
我叫是一名就读于XX国际商务专业的学生，我叫XXX。我想申请XX大学XX专业。
我出生于中国一个普通家庭，在我成长的过程中，我的父亲在一个企业中做管理工作，我的母亲在家照顾我的起居。(you don't need to mention this!)
受到父亲的影响，我从小就对商业和管理有很大的兴趣，希望以后能学习和管理有关的专业从事和管理有关的职业。父亲非常支持我，从小就教给我一些有关管理的知识，对我抱有非常高的期望。
我性格温和，喜欢交朋友，几乎没有和别人发生过冲突。(you don't need to mention this!)
我爱好健身，羽毛球，台球，还喜欢摄影.
我希望能走遍世界各地并且拍摄美丽的照片留作纪念，可以给身边的每一个人讲述这些地方. (you don't need to mention this!)
在大学期间，我认真的完成了我的学业，并且在管理类的科目取得了不错的成绩，例如人力资源管理。在XX课中也在制作了两个公司的对比和分析的PPT并且演讲后得到了不错的成绩。并且在口语发音和清晰程度上得到了老师的认可。
在大学的假期我曾多次做过兼职，，例如在商场的销售工作，在连锁餐厅的服务工作。通过这些不同类型的兼职工作我得到了很多经验，学会了很多销售技巧，突发事件处理技巧和与人沟通的技巧，这些工作同时也给我带来的不少人际关系，为我将来的学习和工作带来更多的便利。
我选择留学的国家是英国，因为从初中刚开始了解这个国家开始，我就喜欢上了这个国家，我认为英国的文化让英国人非常绅士，有礼貌。我喜欢英国便利的交通，世界一流的地铁系统，(the tube system in London is one of the old underground system, but not the best in the world because they are old)
喜欢英国有高楼林立( no, China has more high buildings)，经济发达的大都市，也有自然环境优雅，生活节奏慢的小镇。同时，英国的教育在世界都是领先的，我认为如果可以在英国学习，我将学到更多有用的知识和技能。
选择这个专业因为我从小就很喜欢这个专业，并且我在XX大学HND项目学习了三年这个专业，我希望未来的工作也会和我学的专业有关。而选择这个学校因为我通过各方面的了解，了解到这所学校在商业管理方面有不错的成绩，而且学校的环境和地理位置都非常吸引我，所以这更加坚定了我选择这所学校。
我希望如果我能成功得到在这所学校学习的资格，我将认真完成学业，完成每一项任务，获得更多的专业知识，尽量以更好的成绩毕业。同时，我还希望能够在这所学校攻读研究生学位来更多的提升自己。
如果能在贵校学习将会是我的荣幸，期待你们的答复，谢谢你们！
谢谢你，可是我需要的是翻译成英文啊。
Yes, I know. But if there are so many places can be improved to make it a better personal statement, why don't you try to revise it and draft it in English? You can paste here your draft and I can help you correct it later.
