Question

英语改错

短文改错 (共10分;每小题1分,满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to hear that you are having problems with your exams. You are not lonely. Many students have the same problems like you do.
You told me that you were so anxious to sleep well the night before an exam. Actually, it is very natural. To avoid too nervous, you’d better not take your grades serious. If you had a proper attitude to the scores, you will sleep well and feel energetic.
You said you couldn’t get into your normal state in an exam, that eventually resulted in your poor performance. I suggest you will work hard at your lessons daily instead of sitting up before an exam. You must have confidence in you. When you feel confident, you can do as well as expected.
Wish you a greater progress in your study.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Lonely--> alone
so anxious-->too anxious
to avoid too nervous--> too avoid being too nervous

better not take grade--> better not to take grade
If you had a proper--> If you have a proper
serious-->seriously
as well as expected--> as good as expected
I suggest you will work hard--> I suggest you work hard
you must have confidence in you=you must have more confidence in you
will work hard 去掉 will,

Answer 2

我来答，时间还赶的上吗？
with---in
lonely---alone
like---as
so----too
avoid后面加being
had---have
that---which
resulted in----resulted from
sitting---staying
will work---should work或去掉will