Question

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one day last summer my grandmother fall ill suddenly. Both my parents decided to return back to our hometown immediately. I was taking a training course at that time, for my parents had to leave me home alone. Having never been alone at home before, I asked my parents whether I could invited one of my friend to stay with me and they agreed. Then I called my best friend, Li Hua, and asking him to keep me company at night. Luckily he was willing to accompany me during our parents’ absence. He stayed with me for a week and we had good time together. My experience shows that when we are in seriously trouble we should think of ways to solve the problem by our own.
一共有十处错误

Answer 1

为你解答。
1、fall - fell
2、return back - return
3、for - so
4、invited - invite
5、(one of my) friend - friends
6、asking - asked
7、our - my
8、had (加a) good time
9、seriously - serious
10、by - on

Answer 2

one day last summer my grandmother (fell )ill suddenly. Both my parents decided to ‘return ‘to our hometown immediately. I was taking a training course at that time, my parents had to leave me home alone. Having never been alone at home before, I asked my parents whether I could' invite 'one of my" freinds" to stay with me and they agreed. Then I called my best friend, Li Hua, and "asked " him to keep me' accompanying' at night. Luckily he was willing to accompany me during ‘my ‘parents’ absence. He stayed with me for a week and we had 'a 'good time together. My experience shows that when we are' in trouble ' seriously， we should think of ways to solve the problem ‘on‘ our own

Answer 3

rom the printed page. The only effect of time have been to sift out the bad products; for

Answer 4

ppetite for what’s next and the joy of the game of living. In the center of your heart