翻译
昨天是国庆节。我和我的父亲、母亲、祖父母、兄弟乘公共汽车去了云门山。早上我们下山了。
我看到树木繁茂的群山，野花盛开。我们沿着山路爬上山。走到半山腰，我觉得有点累了，天开始下雨了，我的西湖绸伞错过了。
爸爸对我说：“简，不要半途而废。”最后，我坚持要爬到山顶，山顶的风景如此美丽。我们在放风筝，我很渴，我妈妈给我买了一瓶水。最后我们回家了。最后，从那以后，我一直保留着伞。我很高兴。
原文
yesteday was national day. I and my father, mother, grandparents, brother went to yunmenshan by bus. In the morning we came down the mountain.
I saw wooded mountains, wild flowers bloom. We climb up the hill along the mountain path. Come halfway up the mountain, I feel a little tired，it began to rain,My West Lake silk umbrella missed.
Dad said to me,“Jane，don’t do anything halfway.”at last，So I insisted reached the top, the top of the scenery so beautiful.We were flying kites, I was thirsty, my mother bought me a bottle of water, .finally we went home.finally，Since then, I've kept the umbrella。i was very happy.
如下：
yesteday was national day. I and my father, mother, grandparents, brother went to yunmenshan by bus. In the morning we came down the mountain.
I saw wooded mountains, wild flowers bloom. We climb up the hill along the mountain path. Come halfway up the mountain, I feel a little tired，it began to rain,My West Lake silk umbrella missed.
Dad said to me,“Jane，don’t do anything halfway.”at last，So I insisted reached the top, the top of the scenery so beautiful.We were flying kites, I was thirsty, my mother bought me a bottle of water, .finally we went home.finally，Since then, I've kept the umbrella。i was very happy.
翻译
昨天是国庆节。我和我的父亲、母亲、祖父母、兄弟乘公共汽车去了云门山。早上我们下山了。
我看到树木繁茂的群山，野花盛开。我们沿着山路爬上山。走到半山腰，我觉得有点累了，天开始下雨了，我的西湖绸伞错过了。
爸爸对我说：“简，不要半途而废。”最后，我坚持要爬到山顶，山顶的风景如此美丽。我们在放风筝，我很渴，我妈妈给我买了一瓶水。最后我们回家了。最后，从那以后，我一直保留着伞。我很高兴。
