Question

在线高分跪求外贸业务跟单英文自我介绍。

急！！！！急！！！
先说下本人的情况：本人23岁。女。有一年的相关工作经验。。
英语过6级。获得国际商务单证员证书.
2008年10月----2009年6月 东莞横沥渝沥电子实业有限公司 市务专员
喜欢阅读、书法, 爱好运动、打乒乓球、羽毛球.
回答的好继续追加100分！！
能很好地注意细节、活泼中不失稳重的我, 具有强烈的责任心.进取心和刻苦耐劳的工作精神, 有严谨的工作态度, 有较好的沟通能力及学习能力. 能承担一定的工作压力, 勇于接受挑战
我是想看下前辈们有没有更好的逻辑，懂？

Answer 1

小MM你要找工作啊，自我介绍是比较重要的，当然你面试的过程的细节，表情等表现也是很重要的。祝你找到一份满意的工作。
我的逻辑如下：

My name is... and I am 23 years old now. I graduated from ... university in 2008. I have passed College English Test Band 6 and I got International Commercial Vouching Clerk Certificate. I have about 1 year work experience in international business. I have ever worked in Dongguan electronic company as a consulatant from October,2008 to June, 2009. During my work, I work very hard and carefully. I am open-minded, responsible, aggressive and I am also good at communicating and learning new things. My hobbies are calligraphy, playing Ping Pong and badminton. With these qualifications, I believe your company will benefit from my experiences.

Answer 2

I am 23 years old. Female. One year of relevant work experience. .
English than 6. International Business Vouching Clerk to obtain the certificate.
October 2008 ---- June 2009, Dongguan Heng Li Yu Lik Electronics Industrial Co., Ltd. Marketing Commissioner
Enjoy reading, calligraphy, hobbies, sports, table tennis, badminton.

I Can be a good attention to detail, and lively without losing prudent in me, with a strong sense of responsibility. Enterprising and hard-working spirit of work, a rigorous working attitude, there is good communication skills and learning ability. Can afford a certain degree of working pressure, the courage to accept the challenge

Answer 3

既然你写不出来，还是不要写了。如果别人替你写的很好，招聘员会认为你的英语水平很高，就会当场和你对话，令你张口结舌，可能会更尴尬。
实际上，跟单员只要有大学的英语水平就可以应付，跟单员的主要工作是对出口产品安排生产，跟踪生产过程等。但是需要具备比较好的数理化知识结构，如果是文科生，可能不太适应这种职位。

Answer 4

都过六级了 这个也过不去 我读了高中都可以过

Answer 5

姐姐你太厉害了。