Question

求汉译英

译这两句:感受世界精采;览遍名山大川

这是我译的:The feeling world is brilliant
Sees to the full of the famed scenery

评价下是否合理于语法？
如有更好的或对我作出的修改请写下
名山大川译成名胜就行,并非要高山和大河

Answer 1

呵呵不太符合英语语法，我这里有个翻译，你参考一下哈~~
Experiencing the wonderness of the globe and excitement of the world
Seeing the greatness of the mountains and beauty of the rivers
上下两句有点小小的结构对仗，但没有做到压韵，你就作为参考哈~~~

Answer 2

to enjoy the spectacle of the world and appericate the famous scenery

你那个句子要改改才符合语法，但是我认为还是不是很适合作为翻译：The feeling of the world is birlliant;
To see the full scope of the famed scenery.
我翻译的只是作为动词来处理，有点像口号之类的吧。

Answer 3

感受世界精采 = Feel the excitements of the world.
览遍名山大川=Viewed all the famous moutains and great rivers .
览遍所有名胜=Having viewed all the famous scenic spots. / Viewed all famous sceneries.

Answer 4

感受世界精采;览遍名山大川
To enjoy yourself to the splendid world
To feast your eyes on the famous moutains and great rivers

Answer 5

感受世界精采;览遍名山大川

To feel the wonders of the world
To enjoy the splendors of the nature