Question

英语短文改错(高中)

短文改错一共10处 说明理由(某些句型 单词用法)
We were driving along a narrow road while the car stopped working.We tried to fix it and there was nothing we could do.Paddy and I wanted go off for help,but Mike insisted in staying near the car.He said it was best to stay until help arrive rather than go into the forest and getting lost.However,Paddy and I did not agree and Paddy pointed to a path which he thought it probably lead to a village.We followed a path but soon we were lose.We walked on.After an hhour or so we began to feel frightening.

Answer 1

1. while the car → when the car
固定句型：...when... “正...就在那时...”

2. and there → but there
句意明显为转折

3. wanted go off → wanted to go off
固定短语：want to do sth 想要做某事

4. insisted in → insisted on/upon
固定短语：insist on/upon doing sth 坚持做某事

5. help arrive → help arrives
从句为一般现在时，主语help为单数，动词也必须用三单形式

6. getting lost → get lost
同前面的go into the forest并列，所以也用动词原形

7. it probably → probably
which已经代替了it的功能，做定语从句的主语

8. followed a path → followed the path
第二次提到此path，为特指

9. were lose → were lost
固定短语：be lost=get lost=lose one's way 迷路

10. feel frightening → feel frightened
frightening 令人感到害怕的；frightened 感到害怕的

Answer 2

1.while-when,while后面引导句子的动词有延续性，stop非延续性
2.and-but,前后句是转折关系的
3.wanted to go ,want to do sth.这你知道的
4.arrive-arrived,时态一致
5.getting-get,与go并列，rather than do
6.it去掉，因为定语从句引导词which已经指代了
7.lead-led,he thought 属于插入语，句子应该是过去时
8.a-the,因为是前面明确提到的东西
9.lose-lost ,be/get lost 是迷路的意思
10.frightening-frightened,前者是主语令人感到害怕，后者是主语自身感到害怕，是we 感到害怕，选后者啦

Answer 3

We were driving along a narrow road while
1.（while改成when，后面表示的是一个时间点，用我很不用while，具体的自己查看一下我很和while的区别）
the car stopped working.We tried to fix it and
2.（改为but，表示句意转折）
there was nothing we could do.Paddy and I wanted
3.（加to，want to do sth）
go off for help,but Mike insisted in
4.（in 改成on或者去掉，insist in doing sth坚持做某事，in可以省略） staying near the car.He said it was best
5.（best 改成better，与后面的rather后面的内容形成比较）
to stay until help arrive
6.（arrive后加d，间接引语时态变化）
rather than go into the forest and getting
7.（getting改成get ，and连接的动词形式一致，rather than do 固定搭配） lost.However,Paddy and I did not agree and Paddy pointed to a path which he thought it
8.（it 改成would或者去掉it，先行词path在前面定语从句中不能出现主语，he thought是插入语）
probably lead to a village.We followed a
9.（a改成the，前面提到的path，再次出现冠词用the）
path but soon we were lose.We walked on.After an hhour or so we began to feel frightening
10.（frightening（令人害怕的）改成frightened，表示感到害怕的）

Answer 4

无力，只会5个还不知道对不对