Question

请帮我改改这篇英语作文

我要用这篇稿子进行演讲，请帮我改一改！
这是中文：

大家早上好，今天我要介绍一下自己。只占你们三分钟。我有一点紧张，So pleace forgive me if it shows!.我不是很外向，也不是很内向，我不十很喜欢热闹的地方。在业余时间，我喜欢看卡通片。所以，我喜欢上了日语。我想成为一名顶尖的日语翻译。一名高级的英语的口译。和能说一口流利的德语。我希望能到世界不同的地方去工作，借此我可以周游列国。I am engoying in eating all over the world 我希望有一天能出国深造。结识那些有知识，文化的人。如可以的话，我希望可以翻译一些中国的古典名著，弘扬中国的优良的传统文化。That is all.. Thank you!

这是英文：
Good morning everyone.Today I going to introduce myself,just three minute.As you see,I am a bit nervous and my english is so poor ,so please forgive me if it shows!I am a person who is not very outgoing and not very introversive. Also I am not very into the place which is noisy.I usually watch cartoon in my spare time,because of this cartoon, I am into Japanese.Thurs, I want to be a top Japanese translators and an Advanced English Oral Interpretation and can speak fluent German as well.As you see ,it has long way to go, I would try my best. I hople to work on the different parts of the world,so I can travel around the world as well and I am engoying in eating all over the world. I expect to study abord and make the acquaintance of the person who is marked by refinement in taste and manners; cultured; polished. If it's okay, I would like to translate the classics of Chinese literature into some foreign language, carrying forward our the essence of traditional Chinese culture. That is all,thank you!

请帮我改改，谢谢！

Answer 1

Good morning everyone.Please let me introduce myself.As you see,I am a bit nervous and my english is so poor ,so please forgive me if it shows!I am a person who is not very outgoing and not very introversive. Also I am not very into the place which is noisy.I usually watch cartoon in my spare time.Because of cartoons, I like Japanese.Thus, I want to be a top Japanese translators and an Advanced English Oral Interpretation and can speak fluent German as well.As you see ,it is a long way to go, I would try my best. I hope to work in different parts of the world,so I can travel around the world and enjoy various food all over the world. I expect to study abroad and make acquaintance of the person who is marked by refinement in taste and manners; cultured; polished. If it's okay, I would like to translate the classics of Chinese literature into some foreign languages, carrying forward the essence of traditional Chinese culture. That is all,thank you!

Answer 2

恶 我全部翻译一遍好了 另外 咱也爱动漫 哈哈
Good morning everyone.Today I am going to introduce myself,just take your 3 minutes.I am a bit nervous and I am not good at English,so please forgive me if it shows! I am neither introverted nor extroverted. I am not very fond of the noisy place.I like watch cartoon in my spare time,because of this cartoon, I am interested in Japanese.Therefore,I want to be a top Japanese translators and an High-level English interpreter.What is more, I also want to speak German fluently.As you see ,it will be a hard road, I would try my best.I hope that I can go to different parts of the world to work so that I can travel from state to state.I am engoying in eating all over the world .I hope I can go abroad for further study to the person who are knowledgeable.If it's possible,I would like to translate the Chinese classical allusion masterpiece to carry forward the fine traditional culture of China.That is all,thank you!