Question

请帮我看一下我写的这一小段有没有语法或者用词的错误，在线等！！

This statue depicts our first headmaster Zhang Boling. At the first time, Zhang was a seaman. He thought that only the good education can save China of the time, so he turned to education. Later he met Yan, they founded the series of Nan Kai schools including Nan Kai High School, Nan Kai Girls School, Nan Kai Primary School and Nan Kai University.

Answer 1

At the first time 我 觉得换成 At the beginning 更好些
其他的都没问题

Answer 2

说句实话，大问题没有，但是。。。一看就是中学生译的。
还是找人给你译一下吧！

Answer 3

this statue depicts our first headmaster Zhang Boling. In the beginning, Zhang was a seaman. However,he believed that only good education could save China. Therefore he turned to be a educator. Later, he met Yan and the founded the series of Nan Kai schools,including Nan Kai High School, Nan Kai Girls School, Nan Kai Primary School and Nan Kai University.

这样应该会比较好些。

Answer 4

没有问题 不过就是觉得是中国式英语 照句翻译的

Answer 5

没有任何语法问题