Question

英语作文高手！！！ 快来 在线等！！！！

我本来写了 觉得没问题 结果老师退回来要我重新做、、、 我实在写不出来
我想看看各位高手是怎么写的 我再重新修改！！ 谢谢！！！

这面几点是老师的要求
1. how would you describe yourslef as a learner when you started high school. wherever that was, and how have you grown over the years?
2. what experiences have shaped your learning?
3.who are you as a learner now that you are leaving high school?
4. what is your learning style?
5. what challenges do you face?
6. what works well for you?
文章字数要在250字左右~！~！ 谢谢！！！

Answer 1

Ever since the start of my life in high school,I started to change dramatically in the way of studying English.In the past,the only focus for us to study English was non-stop memorising grammers and vocabularies.Such rule has been destroied in high schools as currently I learned to understand grammers and to think about things in English.
These happend throughout the three years of high school life. All of these changes started with our English teacher in the very first year of high school.That was the time when Mdm Teresa tell us a story from ture life in English. She had brought all of us into to the world of English,from eastern to western,from Arabian Nights to Hamlet.These shaped me a lot in the area of writing.From her,I learned that learning English should be by heart, rather than just by memorising words and grammars.
My learning style has changed to reading English newspapers, and through real life experiences since then onwards.This type of working style has been working somewhat well till now. It's quite sad to say that Mdm Teresa has just passed away last week.As for now, I'm going to leave high school and all of my teacher soon.I am now a mature and firm learner compare to three years ago.
Despite new chanllenges come towards me almost every minute,the most important one is still the examination at the end of high life.That is going to determine my fortune for the whole life.Hopely I will be having a good result for it.

Answer 2

Learning English and it shows.
I have learned English everyday; I have been solving my problems one by one. To become a good writer, I practice a lot. To increase my vocabulary, I memorize whatever new words I come across. To improve my spelling, I practice typing the new words I am learning on a computer and let it tell me whether I have spelt them correctly or not.
Finally, to practice speaking, I memorize many essays and conversations and try to recite them, using a tape recorder. In this way, I have been gradually improving my English.

Answer 3

如果说你写了，但是你觉得没有问题，那我觉得我没有必要再写一份，因为我在写一份出来都是我自己的经验，我的经验比较特殊，很可能和你对不上号。

所以如果可以：
请你百度Hi里给我你写过的那篇文章，我帮你用红笔改完，交还给你。
发我E-mail也行 我的e-mail是：shan199105@sina.com。
也可以用QQ或者MSN传给我，我个人不想在这里公开我的QQ和MSN号码，如果你需要，请你百度Hi我，我在百度Hi中私聊给你！

我现在国际学校就读，明年准备留学加拿大，雅思6.5分，所以我的英语能力你完全可以相信，希望能采纳我的意见，谢谢！

Answer 4

Learning English and it shows.
I have learned English everyday; I have been solving my problems one by one. To become a good writer, I practice a lot. To increase my vocabulary, I memorize whatever new words I come across. To improve my spelling, I practice typing the new words I am learning on a computer and let it tell me whether I have spelt them correctly or not.
Finally, to practice speaking, I memorize many essays and conversations and try to recite them, using a tape recorder. In this way, I have been gradually improving my English.