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请求合适地翻译一首好听的英文歌《Breathe》

请求合适地翻译如下这首好听的英文歌，我没分了，悬赏只能出5很抱歉

Breathe - Sixpence None The Richer

Take my sorrow and my sin
I will run into your arms again
Hold me farther
Once again my tears are dried
By your perfect love that's river-wide
Over-flowing
As I stand on it's bank
With my arms overhead
I overcome

As I breathe
The air of heaven
Drawing in your face
When I breathe
I feel your fullness come alive
Inside of me
You're the breath that I breathe

Covered by the evening sky
I turn my gaze to where your kingdom lies
Deep inside me
A silent whisper in my mind
Sweet surrender to your love divine
Peace enfolding
In the stillness I empty my soul
And your healing presence flows

(chorus)
As I breathe
The air of heaven
Drawing in Your fragrance
When I breathe
I feel Your fullness come alive
Inside of me
You're the breath that I breathe

It's taking hold
It's second nature when I
Savor. Savor. Savor.
When I Savor. Savor. Savor.
You

As I breathe.
(repeat chorus)

Answer 1

Breathe - Sixpence None The Richer

Take my sorrow and my sin 接受我的悲伤和罪过
I will run into your arms again 我会重投你的怀抱
Hold me farther 抱紧我
Once again my tears are dried 我的眼泪会再次淌完
By your perfect love that's river-wide 因为你完美的爱
Over-flowing 如河水般宽广充沛
As I stand on it's bank 我站在爱河之岸
With my arms overhead 也只好举高双手
I overcome 向你投降

As I breathe 就像我呼吸的是
The air of heaven 天堂的气息
Drawing in your face 吸引了你的脸
When I breathe 当我呼吸
I feel your fullness come alive 我感觉到你重新充盈了我
Inside of me 在我心里
You're the breath that I breathe 你就是我的空气

Covered by the evening sky 黄昏的天空笼罩着
I turn my gaze to where your kingdom lies 我凝视着你王国的方向
Deep inside me 在我内心深处
A silent whisper in my mind 在我脑海里有个静静的细语
Sweet surrender to your love divine 甜蜜的围绕着你的爱朝拜
Peace enfolding 祥和围绕着
In the stillness I empty my soul 在沉静中我献出我的灵魂
And your healing presence flows 于是你的出现治愈了我

(chorus)
As I breathe 就像我呼吸的是
The air of heaven 天堂的气息
Drawing in Your fragrance 引来了你的香气
When I breathe 当我呼吸
I feel Your fullness come alive 我感受到你重新充盈了我
Inside of me 在我内心
You're the breath that I breathe 你就是我的空气

It's taking hold 紧紧抓住
It's second nature when I 这是我第二次生命
Savor. Savor. Savor. 拯救者
When I Savor. Savor. Savor. 拯救者
You 是你

As I breathe. 就像我在呼吸
(repeat chorus)

——这个乐队的歌不错，我喜欢他们的<KISS ME>