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Culture smart or Science intelligent

----- If we would never have had computers

Ladies and gentlemen,

What will you do, if we would never have had computers,when asked this question,a young man, who addicted himself to play computer, said, i want to enjoy kungfu tea and chess with my dear father and have a chat with my dear mother like friends, but in fact that has not happened for a century. until today, I suddenly realized so big a loss the computer bring me.

In this modern society, why more and more people often feel lost like the young man? That’s because we rely too much，even totally, on kinds of “tools”,like a computer.even we can not image
If there is no computer to send emails,
if there is no oil to feed cars,
if there is no power to charge mobile phones,
if there is no science intelligent,what our world will be

Why most of us only stand at a loss when these “terrible” things happened. That’s because, with wide application of science intelligent, we are leaking our culture smart little by little.

Culture smart is a kind of a good trait accumulated from generation to generation and refers to the deposit of wisdom, diligence, courage, and goodness.

Precisely because of this trait,
we can beat the snow disaster,
we can win the battle against Sichuan earthquake,
we can work so many wonders in Beijing Olympic Games
Moreover ,we can’t forget the fact like this,
A car can not drive you to any place you want
A phone can not connect the lovers forever
A farther can never content himself on watching his daughter’s photo without a face-to-face meet.

Because what we pursuit is the true feeling in our deep heart. This is the culture smart of human being.That we can never discard,but preserve and carry forward forever

Answer 1

"If we would never have had computers"其实错了，应该是“If we never have had computer” 如果你要表达的是：“如果我们将不再有电脑”应该是“if we would not have computer any more” 还有 由于computer这里指的是电脑这一东西，应该用单数。
具体还有不少 我还觉得在语言组织上有问题（只是个人意见，仅供参考，因为我也不是什么权威） 我就直接在原文上改了错误的地方（大体内容不改了啊）Culture smart or Science intelligent

----- If we would not have computer any more

Ladies and gentlemen,

What would you do, If we would not have computer any more
？When asked this question,a young man, who addicted himself to play computer, said, I enjoy tea and kongfu。 What’s more ，I am in favor of playing the chess with my father and chating with my mother to share our family love。However，I feel a great loss since computer come into my life！
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Answer 2

For Which Way Shall We Be Headed ----Culture Smart or Science Intelligent Over the past few thousand years of human history, many a conflict between culture and science had been taking place. And it was these conflicts that had long been debated: Which, on earth, should be counted as the superior one, culture or science? Up to present, the two of them haven’t yet reached a compromise. So now the problem we’re still facing is, for which way shall we be headed, the cultural one or the scientific one? Dating back to the Ancient Society, deniably speaking, the cultural atmosphere then was quite strong. Our ancestors then were quite smart, they created different kinds of language, Chinese, English, French, and so on, which had helped human being greatly in stepping into the Cultural Age; they created the notes and did the very first piece of music, which was a milestone for the modern music; they created the rough but important laws or rules or disciplines for the societies, some of which are still working today. Maybe we could say, our ancestors then had done everything to perfect culture, which surely, was good, but, not perfect. They should have paid equivalent attention to science, while they didn’t. As a consequence, the human society hadn’t been developing very fast for the past few thousand years. Let’s check out another instance, the discovery of the DNA Double-helix Structure. Imagine, if Crick and Watson were not cultivated but that sort of person who could only do scientific experiments, who cared nothing but their personal benefits, who knew nothing about responsibility and morality, what would have happened? Maybe this significant discovery would have been a fatal disaster to all human being. But lucky enough, they were cultivated and moral, which led to a good result that had been benefiting all mankind from the day DNA was discovered. In which case, culture had played a very crucial part. As far as I could tell, from an undergraduate’s angle, culture and science are the two invaluable parts that neither of them could be ignored. Just like peas and carrots, both of them are indispensable factors for the development of every singe country or society. And only by combining the two of them can we hope to be headed for a brighter future. WELCOME TO 2009 CCTV CUP ENGLISH SPEAKING CONTEST My appreciation.