Question

帮我检查以下这个英语小短文有什么语法上错误的地方。

Hello, Kayla,
I have seem you post since a few minute ago. Amd I really want to make friends with you. Now, let me tell you something about me.
My name is Mike , and I am 15 years old. I like playing basketball and swimming . I think you're very interesting, so I want to make friend with you , I hope you can accept me.
Your,
Mike

Answer 1

改后为：
Hello, Kayla,
I have read your post a few minutes ago. And I really want to make friends with you, because I think you're very interesting.Now, let me tell you something about me.
My name is Mike , and I am 15 years old. I like playing basketball and swimming.
I hope you can accept me.Thank you.I will wait for your answer.
Yours,
Mike

Answer 2

Hello, Kayla,
I read your post a few minutes ago. Amd I really want to make friends with you. Now, let me tell you something about myself.
My name is Mike , and I am 15 years old. I like playing basketball and swimming . I think you're very interesting, so I want to make friends with you , I hope you can agree with me.
Yours,
Mike

Answer 3

Hello, Kayla,
I have seem you post since a few minute ago. Amd I really want to make friends with you. Now, let me tell you something about me.
My name is Mike , I am 15 years old. I like playing basketball and swimming . I think you're very interesting, so I want to be you friend, andI hope you can accept me.
Your
Mike