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Hello,Kayla,Ihaveseemyoupostsinceafewminuteago.AmdIreallywanttomakefriendswithyou.Now...
Hello, Kayla,
I have seem you post since a few minute ago. Amd I really want to make friends with you. Now, let me tell you something about me.
My name is Mike , and I am 15 years old. I like playing basketball and swimming . I think you're very interesting, so I want to make friend with you , I hope you can accept me.
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I have seem you post since a few minute ago. Amd I really want to make friends with you. Now, let me tell you something about me.
My name is Mike , and I am 15 years old. I like playing basketball and swimming . I think you're very interesting, so I want to make friend with you , I hope you can accept me.
Your,
Mike 展开
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Hello, Kayla,
I have read your post a few minutes ago. And I really want to make friends with you, because I think you're very interesting.Now, let me tell you something about me.
My name is Mike , and I am 15 years old. I like playing basketball and swimming.
I hope you can accept me.Thank you.I will wait for your answer.
Yours,
Mike
Hello, Kayla,
I have read your post a few minutes ago. And I really want to make friends with you, because I think you're very interesting.Now, let me tell you something about me.
My name is Mike , and I am 15 years old. I like playing basketball and swimming.
I hope you can accept me.Thank you.I will wait for your answer.
Yours,
Mike
2009-10-19 · 知道合伙人教育行家
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Hello, Kayla,
I read your post a few minutes ago. Amd I really want to make friends with you. Now, let me tell you something about myself.
My name is Mike , and I am 15 years old. I like playing basketball and swimming . I think you're very interesting, so I want to make friends with you , I hope you can agree with me.
Yours,
Mike
I read your post a few minutes ago. Amd I really want to make friends with you. Now, let me tell you something about myself.
My name is Mike , and I am 15 years old. I like playing basketball and swimming . I think you're very interesting, so I want to make friends with you , I hope you can agree with me.
Yours,
Mike
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Hello, Kayla,
I have seem you post since a few minute ago. Amd I really want to make friends with you. Now, let me tell you something about me.
My name is Mike , I am 15 years old. I like playing basketball and swimming . I think you're very interesting, so I want to be you friend, andI hope you can accept me.
Your
Mike
I have seem you post since a few minute ago. Amd I really want to make friends with you. Now, let me tell you something about me.
My name is Mike , I am 15 years old. I like playing basketball and swimming . I think you're very interesting, so I want to be you friend, andI hope you can accept me.
Your
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