Question

麻烦帮我修改一下作文~~急~~在线等

如果愿意的话我把作文发给你
英语的~如果打的好的话我会加分的~~~

Answer 1

I like to watch movies very much.I prefer watching action movies and documentary movies in the movie theater. And I would like to watch romantic or comedies in my room.I always watch movies on the weekends,on Saturday evenings,I open my laptop and take some snacks.I really enjoy that moment.
I like all the movies,but if I have to choose one of them, I will choose ‘Edward Scissorhands’. This movie tells us a story about a robot called Edward. Edward lives in a old alcazar.An old inventor made him.However,he does not have hands,He just has a pare of scissors in his arm. He looks terrorist ,but he is really kind.Mrs.Peg takes him home,and takes care of him.He has fallen in love with Peg’s daughter Kim, but Kim does not like him.Thus, there is some trouble from now on.At the end of this movie,Edward kills Kim’s boyfriend,and he goes back to the old inventor alone.
It is a sad story,I hope the end of the story can change Kim
and Edward lives with her.The other important way that I love to watch movie is because I can learn a lot from the movie.Even though Edward is a robot ,he still loves Kim in his own way.Jim’s boyfriend wants to buy a car ,and he asks Jim to let Edward help him.So they cheat Edward ,and tell him the door can’t open.Edward helps them,when he opens the door, alarm is ringing,finally he is sized by plice.Eventually Jim falls in love with Edward,but they can’t live together.Not only Edward kills Jim’s BF but also Edward is a robot,and he does not have hands.Jim is lovely to Edward,and he knows he can not give Jim a good life,so he leaves her.
Many people say they cried at the end of this movie,and be honestly,I cried 3 times during this movie.I can not hold my tears from the beginning
to the end, whenever I watch it .I hope Edward and Jim can live together,and the story has a happy end.

作文已修改，不知是否满意。你的作文写得很好，只是时态和大小写应该注意，我以为你修改，如有异议，在线联系。

Answer 2

不管成否，看看先，

Answer 3

先发来看看，是大学的还是高中的呢？

Answer 4

作文在哪那？